ext_21392 ([identity profile] kallistei.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] dbsk_flashfic2008-09-14 08:02 pm
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Capriccio For Two Voices (Drabble Challenge 29: Duet)

Title: Capriccio For Two Voices
Author: [livejournal.com profile] kallistei
Pairing: Jaejoong/Changmin
Word count: 150
Concrit?: Always.
Summary: Jaejoong's still got something to teach Changmin.


"Hey, it's okay," Jaejoong says, leaning back and chuckling as he rubs at his nose, fond enough that Changmin doesn't take offence immediately at the laughter. "Just," Jaejoong pauses, makes the Jaejoong-noise that means revelation, a cunning plan, disaster in the making. "Just think of it like a duet, yeah?"

Changmin raises an eyebrow, asks, "Duet?" flat and unimpressed.

Jaejoong nods vigorously. "Take my timing cues. Give your own. Here." He leans in and brushes their lips together, a flicker of tongue against Changmin's mouth that has Changmin parting his lips instinctively in response. "Like that. Cue! Worked, right?"

Jaejoong might just be on to something; of course, Changmin doesn't admit that aloud. Instead he presses forward and kisses Jaejoong. He lingers this time, lips moving against Jaejoong's, and waits for the way Jaejoong breaks away and giggles when he realises Changmin's mouthing the words to 'Babo' against his lips.

[identity profile] xiahtic.livejournal.com 2008-09-15 07:08 pm (UTC)(link)
sdjklfhksdjhfjksdlfhjklsdhfjkshdlfksjkdfhlsjkdhfkhsdjkfhkjsdfh BABO OMFG SHAY. SHAY ILUSM WRITE JAEMIN FOREVER

[identity profile] quiet-heartache.livejournal.com 2008-09-15 07:18 pm (UTC)(link)
'Jaejoong pauses, makes the Jaejoong-noise that means revelation, a cunning plan, disaster in the making.' - <33333333

loves it

thanks

[identity profile] miyun.livejournal.com 2008-09-15 07:26 pm (UTC)(link)
*snickers* Okay, that's just full of delightful. 8D

[identity profile] emda.livejournal.com 2008-09-15 10:47 pm (UTC)(link)
*is incoherent* *snuggles jaemin* nfagfonfg;dsgufehdnfndjgfuivdcbnjkv

[identity profile] yuxo.livejournal.com 2008-09-15 11:05 pm (UTC)(link)
BABO OMG SLAUGHTERED. *_________________________________________*

aflsdfjfdslj meltinnnnnnnnnngggggg ♥ why are you so awesomesauce. :')

[identity profile] flame-angel88.livejournal.com 2008-09-15 11:13 pm (UTC)(link)
"Just," Jaejoong pauses, makes the Jaejoong-noise that means revelation, a cunning plan, disaster in the making. "Just think of it like a duet, yeah?"

I love it &hearts

[identity profile] kurogoma.livejournal.com 2008-09-15 11:55 pm (UTC)(link)
jaemin!!! ♥ :D

[identity profile] wmelon-kaiye.livejournal.com 2008-09-16 08:21 am (UTC)(link)
EPIC JAEMIN. YOU WIN.