If At First (Drabble Challenge 30: Vegetables)

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

Title: If At First
Author: kallistei
Pairing: Yunho/Yoochun
Word count: 150
Concrit?: Always.
Summary: Yunho perseveres.


"Why is there carrot puree on the ceiling?" Yoochun asks, frowning at the plaster as if it's going to start speaking to him. Instead, he just gets a glob of orange paste on his forehead.

Yunho says, "Um." There's a long pause. "Good question."

Yoochun waits, wiping carrot off his face, but that seems to be the whole answer. He licks cautiously at a bit that landed at the corner of his mouth, and makes a horrified face. "Ugh, that's disgusting."

"Hey!" Yunho says.

"It's true," Yoochun insists. "What were you even trying to make?"

"Just boiled carrots to go with dinner. You know, vegetables," Yunho says, a little sulky, then swears. "Dinner!"

He opens the oven, and the smoke alarm beeps wildly just before the automatic sprinklers go off.

"Shit," Yoochun says, with feeling. "You're never cooking again, Leader-sshi. Also, Jaejoong's going to kill you. I'd start running now."

Comments

[quiet-heartache.livejournal.com]

fair advice chun. yunnie had better run XD

thanks

[applesu.livejournal.com]

cries. failho. can i have one? XD amazing♥

[graveyardgrin.livejournal.com]

adorable!♥ I'd like to see Yunho face the wrath of Jaejoong 8D

[samikitty.livejournal.com]

^O^;;; i like yunho's "um... good question." reaction. ^O^ total love~~~ also, yoochun's honesty/bluntness is rockin'. ^O^;;

[yuxo.livejournal.com]

:') that is just so. ugh. so cute.

i can't take your writing anymore. D: i demand you come here and resuscitate me after having killed me 3893489389987 times. D:

♥

[shinchul303.livejournal.com]

"He opens the oven, and the smoke alarm beeps wildly just before the automatic sprinklers go off."

Way too good!! Yunho better leave the country before Jaejoong gets back.

[illuminations.livejournal.com]

oh, yunho. that's so much fail. :(((

[bitterkoekjes.livejournal.com]

good advice, chun. now rush your hyung to start running!

[audient.livejournal.com]

the image of yoochun staring at the ceiling is precious :')

[may-song.livejournal.com]

:D Yunho trying to cook and failing disastrously? Wonderful.

[xiahtic.livejournal.com]

sdjfhsdjkf still love it the second time around omfg *_____________________* ♥♥♥ oh yunhosdkfjshdjkfhdf

[thevignette.livejournal.com]

oh yunho ♥

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

Yoochun gives good advice. When he wants to. ;)

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

Sorry, failho is already taken ;) Thanks!

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

Wouldn't we all? XD Thank you.

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

Heh, thank you!

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

Trust me, I'm a doctor! *cpr* ;)

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

It is fearsome!

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

He's on his way to the airport right now. ;)

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

His fail, it is awesome. :((

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

Yoochun will smuggle him out of the country!

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

He was confused. :X

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

:D Thanks!

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

:))) ♥

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

He tries so hard. :X

[kwong521.livejournal.com]

Loved this so much ♥. I really love that I'm seeing lots more fics of him as a faily boy-man rather than a controlling leader-sshi bastard. :)

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I like to think my Yunho's always been a faily boy-man. ;)

[kwong521.livejournal.com]

I like to think my Yunho's always been a faily boy-man. ;)

YES :). This is one of the biggest reasons you're one of my favorite writers in the DBSK fandom ^^.

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

Aw, thank you! :)

[jt-fangirlism.livejournal.com]

XDDD
why is it that even yunho's fail side is so hot??
*gets bricked*
better listen to chunnie cause he knows better..^^

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

Thanks! :)

[ex-trolleys.livejournal.com]

I bet orange is a good color on Yoochun! and I second everything kwong521 said. \o/

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

Yoochun likes to think it is, anyway. XD Faily boy-man go!

... the lurking Yoochun in your icon freaks me out, btw.

[rethzneworld.livejournal.com]

LOLOL this is hilarious~ XD JJ gonna get YH for that. Thanks for the ahead warning Chun~