ext_21392 ([identity profile] kallistei.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] dbsk_flashfic2008-04-29 03:29 pm

Gameplay (For Drabble Challenge 12: Intersections)

Title: Gameplay
Author: [livejournal.com profile] kallistei
Word count: 200
Concrit?: Always.
Pairing: Junsu/Changmin
Summary: Backseat driving can be a dangerous hobby.


"Left!" Changmin orders from his position cross-legged on the floor. "No no no, your other left! You've gone past it now, go back. There! It's right there!"

The instructions keep coming, Changmin's eyes fixed on the screen and the textbook open on his lap completely forgotten, until Junsu rolls his eyes and pokes at him with a toe, exasperated. "You're supposed to be studying!" he grumbles, not taking his eyes off the tv either because he'll probably walk his character off a cliff if he does. "Stop being a backseat driver and let me play in peace!"

Changmin sticks his tongue out, and Junsu just catches it from the corner of his eye. "I'm only trying to help because you're incompetent," Changmin says, and it's the last straw, Junsu's eyes going wide at the insult, then narrowing.

"I'll show you incompetent, you ungracious brat!" he yells - but quietly, because Yoochun's napping, still not completely recovered from the cold that's been going around, and if he gets woken up now Jaejoong or Yunho will smite them. He drops the controller (forget the character, who needs them anyway?) and launches himself at Changmin, ready to demonstrate the tickle-attack of a lifetime.

[identity profile] cynsinnn.livejournal.com 2008-04-29 02:35 pm (UTC)(link)
CUTE :D I love Minsu game-playing xD It's basically the essence of Minsu xD

[identity profile] realitywaiting.livejournal.com 2008-04-29 02:44 pm (UTC)(link)
CUTIIIIIIIIIIEEEEESSS!! hee! X3

[identity profile] wmelon-kaiye.livejournal.com 2008-04-29 02:53 pm (UTC)(link)
tickle-attack?
I'm disappointed. :P
HAHA
roki: ([Minsu]  달의 그림자 아래 선 나)

[personal profile] roki 2008-04-29 03:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Min and Su, so cute. ^^

Tickle attack? Man, I was expecting something to do with sex. :D;

But anyways, loved this. ♥

[identity profile] quiet-heartache.livejournal.com 2008-04-29 06:38 pm (UTC)(link)
lol as other readers have pointed out, the world expects more from MinSu than just tickling... but then my experience of fics tells me tickling often leads to much more, and to be honest, i prefer a cute build up XD maybe u should write a sequel to satisfy them? :D
thanks for the cuteness tho!

[identity profile] haru-no-keeki.livejournal.com 2008-04-29 06:43 pm (UTC)(link)
aaahahhh! me love <3<3 MinSu=♥

[identity profile] indifferance.livejournal.com 2008-04-30 09:23 am (UTC)(link)
Tickle attack the bothersome Changmin! Tehe.

Cute. :)