The Desire To Ignite (for flashfic challenge 14: Seven)

[coolplastic19.livejournal.com]

Title: The Desire To Ignite
Author: coolplastic19
Word count: 209
Concrit?: Hit me with your best shot
Pairing: YooMin
A/N: This is written from Yoochun's perspective and is a follow up to The Burning Flames of Desire. Also, for shinchul303, who suggested I do the follow up in the first place :)

Yoochun can see the lust burning in Changmin’s eyes
Gluttony branding itself in Changmin’s lips whenever he walks past
Greed twisting like thorns around the other’s body, bloody scratches marking his sin
Whenever he thinks about what he’s doing to the other man, sloth slides off of his body like innocence
And even the wrath of the gods isn’t enough to stop Yoochun from his pursuits
He’ll make the heavens envy him in his persistence and his desire
And in the process, he’ll smash Changmin’s glass pride to bits and make the other man crave him
Chastity is but a passing whim whenever Changmin looks at him
But because temperance is a virtue, he’ll let Changmin’s desire for him boil slowly
Until all the charity has evaporated from the other’s body and the only thing left for Changmin to do is to take him
So he waits, with the diligence of a bomb maker, he waits and seduces and lures
Patience like a ticking clock in his heart
As he lets Changmin feel the kindness of space and distance before the overwhelming pressure of desire consumes him
Humility be damned, because he’d rather ignite that fire even if it singes them both to nothing but dust in the wind

Comments

[shinchul303.livejournal.com]

Haha! Beautiful. I kind of figured Yoochun knew exactly what he was doing all along.

"Whenever he thinks about what he’s doing to the other man, sloth slides off of his body like innocence." (how so Micky!)

"So he waits, with the diligence of a bomb maker, he waits and seduces and lures...patience like a ticking clock in his heart."

Evil man. Poor not innocent at all Min.

[coolplastic19.livejournal.com]

Thanks! And yup, he's an evil little man XD
and i love how you quoted my two favorite lines in this ^^

[shinchul303.livejournal.com]

Really loved the sloth thing. Have you seen the (old) video clip of them in a van on the way to a concert, and they do the Dong Bang Shin Ki "Fighting" handshake/yell, but Yoochun is fast asleep in his seat. I think it's Yunho who just takes his hand and lays it on top of all the others for the cheer. To the camera's eye, he never even wakes up (though after your fic I do wonder...)

Also was taken aback--your really DID do a corollary piece--virtually a line for line read on the first post! Pretty advanced writing.

[coolplastic19.livejournal.com]

LOL, that clip was adorable. And JJ with his Hamtaro pj's XD
I don't believe someone that greasy can be innocent. I refuse to XDD

ahh, thanks dear! :D I was trying to follow the mood, and then the story followed naturally after it ^^