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dbsk_flashficTitle: The Desire To Ignite
Author: coolplastic19
Word count: 209
Concrit?: Hit me with your best shot
Pairing: YooMin
A/N: This is written from Yoochun's perspective and is a follow up to The Burning Flames of Desire. Also, for shinchul303, who suggested I do the follow up in the first place :)
Gluttony branding itself in Changmin’s lips whenever he walks past
Greed twisting like thorns around the other’s body, bloody scratches marking his sin
Whenever he thinks about what he’s doing to the other man, sloth slides off of his body like innocence
And even the wrath of the gods isn’t enough to stop Yoochun from his pursuits
He’ll make the heavens envy him in his persistence and his desire
And in the process, he’ll smash Changmin’s glass pride to bits and make the other man crave him
Chastity is but a passing whim whenever Changmin looks at him
But because temperance is a virtue, he’ll let Changmin’s desire for him boil slowly
Until all the charity has evaporated from the other’s body and the only thing left for Changmin to do is to take him
So he waits, with the diligence of a bomb maker, he waits and seduces and lures
Patience like a ticking clock in his heart
As he lets Changmin feel the kindness of space and distance before the overwhelming pressure of desire consumes him
Humility be damned, because he’d rather ignite that fire even if it singes them both to nothing but dust in the wind
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Date: 2008-09-09 02:55 am (UTC)Niiiice. That was a great line.
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Date: 2008-09-09 03:11 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-09-09 02:56 am (UTC)muahaha. go chun. so evilly delicious.
i'm super tired to give proper comment lol.
but but know...
you are still awesome. ♥
:D :D :D
hehe. :]
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Date: 2008-09-09 03:13 am (UTC)*ilu*
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Date: 2008-09-09 11:53 am (UTC)"Whenever he thinks about what he’s doing to the other man, sloth slides off of his body like innocence." (how so Micky!)
"So he waits, with the diligence of a bomb maker, he waits and seduces and lures...patience like a ticking clock in his heart."
Evil man. Poor not innocent at all Min.
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Date: 2008-09-09 02:54 pm (UTC)and i love how you quoted my two favorite lines in this ^^
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Date: 2008-09-10 12:06 am (UTC)Also was taken aback--your really DID do a corollary piece--virtually a line for line read on the first post! Pretty advanced writing.
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Date: 2008-09-10 04:32 am (UTC)I don't believe someone that greasy can be innocent. I refuse to XDD
ahh, thanks dear! :D I was trying to follow the mood, and then the story followed naturally after it ^^
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Date: 2008-09-09 03:33 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-09-09 04:37 pm (UTC)*ILU2* <33333333
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Date: 2008-09-09 06:25 pm (UTC)counterparrrrrt
fabulous. slower, which i like, shows chun's 'waiting' part in it all...XD
cool
thanks :P
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Date: 2008-09-09 10:45 pm (UTC)he just slowly waits until min gives in to his seducing~
-sigh- chun's so evil. yet so much love♥ XD
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