ext_305276 ([identity profile] purplehaze-33.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] dbsk_flashfic2008-11-03 04:04 pm

Dirty Little Secret

Title: Dirty Little Secret, companion piece to Of cigarette smoke, an excess of caramel macchiato and lots of incomplete lyrics
Author: Thea
Genre: Romance
Word Count: 200
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Jaesu
Summary: in the red light district, there is a very pretty boy-only sixteen years old-his name is junsu-you love him-
Concrit: Yes:)
A/N: To be honest, this drabble is connected with an upcoming fic that is top-sekrit:D the title of the jaechun drabble is actually the title of that fic in which the pairing will be jaesuchun.

 

there is a reason for the things we do, the sins that we’ve committed in the past, the infidelities of the present and the bleak future, grey and unpromising, why do we love to torture ourselves like this?

 

eyes, wide open and blank-kisses all over a pale chest-the harsh sound of a zipper being pulled down-the roads are quiet-you’re on patrol-ditched your partner-in the red light district, there is a very pretty boy-only sixteen years old-his name is junsu-you love him-

 

soft red hair-pale skin-frighteningly skinny frame-you throw your head back-force him to take you in completely-watch him choke, in detached fascination-you love him-want him-mine-he tastes of honey and sugar-so sweet and yet, so sinful-he’s put you under a spell-made you fantasize and lust-insomnia-

 

lips stained in semen-nail-bitten fingers grab the fifty-the spell is broken-he licks his lips-you hook your fingers in his waistband-another harsh, bruising kiss-

 

you love him so much it makes you breathless-your partner asks you where the fuck you were-you finger the covered gun and absently reply-nowhere.

 

sleep is nothing-you watch and patrol with blank, empty eyes-push silky bangs away from grimy forehead and dream of a sixteen-year old hustler with lips of magic-dirty, little secret-Junsu.

 

 

 


 

[identity profile] darknessgryphon.livejournal.com 2008-11-03 09:51 pm (UTC)(link)
omg *-* jaesu *fangirly heart is satisfied but wanting*

ugggh, wanna know what top-sekrit fic is so badly~~~ *-*

[identity profile] darknessgryphon.livejournal.com 2008-11-04 01:00 am (UTC)(link)
You taunt me with your vagueness. *cries*

And you also reminded me that Nanowrimo is eating me. *eeps* *runs off to write desperately*

[identity profile] darknessgryphon.livejournal.com 2008-11-04 01:46 am (UTC)(link)
lol, no, not funny. my muses hate me. they gave me jaesu about a week a go and didn't let me finish. and now like, they just hate me.

[identity profile] naito-ftw.livejournal.com 2008-11-03 10:06 pm (UTC)(link)
spot ♥


anywho....
i love it...
its beautiful and yet, sexy.

it makes you imagine and yet...
leaves a mystery

[identity profile] naito-ftw.livejournal.com 2008-11-04 12:00 am (UTC)(link)
yay!

demo....
aren't you supposed to be on hiatus?
ooohhh
busted
o_o
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[identity profile] c-h-i-b-i.livejournal.com 2008-11-03 10:52 pm (UTC)(link)
oh. my lovely jaesu. TT.TT they just fit the needy/angsty/NEEDY category the most imo. and you always manage to write it so perfectly. TT.TT *loves*

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[identity profile] kallistei.livejournal.com 2008-11-03 11:42 pm (UTC)(link)
No more than 200 words, for a drabble challenge. Please cut one word.

[identity profile] kimbuibui.livejournal.com 2008-11-04 12:05 am (UTC)(link)
khhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!

Junsu is an enigma to Jae.

[identity profile] incredible-neji.livejournal.com 2008-11-04 12:37 am (UTC)(link)
i gasped and choked for a fic earlier today, and now i can't quite catch my breath. seriously, you kids are no good for my respiration, but i don't care. 'twas quite wonderful, can't wait for the rest!

[identity profile] kiomi-hakuri.livejournal.com 2008-11-04 02:05 am (UTC)(link)
umma like always I loved~~
so nice and sexy~~!

I wanna read this fic oki?

kisses

[identity profile] yukishirou.livejournal.com 2008-11-04 02:38 am (UTC)(link)
So beautiful, yet so sad.. ♥ ;__;

[identity profile] harkk.livejournal.com 2008-11-04 02:49 am (UTC)(link)
What a great way to start my day. [: I'm feeling so happy now!:D Lub lub no.8 for you! <3

P.S.
I think I'm gonna make a Jaesu flag instead of a Jaesu banner. ^^

[identity profile] milollita.livejournal.com 2008-11-04 05:34 am (UTC)(link)
YOU. are writing cop!Jae and what?Su...
Zomg I will not miss this out for the world <3

[identity profile] oldwillow-brook.livejournal.com 2008-11-04 04:09 pm (UTC)(link)
THHHHHHHEAAA!

I have to run to class but save me a seat!!!

Will be back later! ♥

[identity profile] oldwillow-brook.livejournal.com 2008-11-07 09:27 am (UTC)(link)
sd;afkjasdf OKAY SO I SUCK REAL BAD BUT OMG JAEJOONG!

I don't know what to think. Is Jaejoong using Junsu for his own wants and desires? Is Jaejoong really in love with Jaejoong? Is this just lust? Where does Jaejoong meet Junsu for the first time? WHy is Junsu a 16 year old boy having to give bj's for a living? I want to know so much more about this, you have no idea. I have so many different ideas of what it could be but I want to know your answers.

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ Curious. So very curious.

[identity profile] boojaesubabe.livejournal.com 2008-11-04 08:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Love it.

Very gritty with Jae basically challenging the status quo.

I cannot wait until this top sekrit fic is truly revealed, bb!

[identity profile] baboboy.livejournal.com 2008-11-05 04:13 am (UTC)(link)
I don't know why but I get a feeling you're going to break my heart with this fic
TT____________TT

[identity profile] kuro-wolf.livejournal.com 2008-11-07 04:36 pm (UTC)(link)
woah~
... (0_o") ...
woah~

Somehow, your drabbles give a more gritty impact on JaeSu.
Blunt; straight to the point.
I'm not complaining, i like it! XD