ext_21392 ([identity profile] kallistei.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] dbsk_flashfic2008-12-09 10:37 pm

yours to make your own (Drabble Challenge 39: Dysrhythmia)

Title: yours to make your own
Author: [livejournal.com profile] kallistei
Pairing: Yunho/Changmin
Word count: 200
Concrit?: Always.
Summary: Not just a river in Egypt.


It's the way his heart stutter-skips and then just stops entirely for a beat that confuses Yunho, making him miss a step and stumble, setting off a chain reaction that ends with all five of them in a pile on the floor and the choreographer staring at him in befuddlement. Scrambling to his feet, Yunho apologises profusely and reaches to help the others up so they can go back to practicing. In his head, he puts the whole thing down to indigestion, eating too fast at lunch and not having long enough to wait before they had to start practice.

But then it happens again, a lurch in his chest that happens out of the blue while they're driving back to the apartment, Changmin's head tipping onto his shoulder as Changmin curls warm and sleepy against his side, and once more while he's doing the dishes after dinner. He tells himself it's nothing to do with Changmin's smile when he walked past, on his way to raid the fridge, but the denial's hopeless in the face of the way Changmin brushes casual fingers against his side and Yunho's heart turns over like it knows it belongs in Changmin's palm.

[identity profile] kayjayloves.livejournal.com 2008-12-09 10:51 pm (UTC)(link)
dfkll ♥!

his heart turns over like it knows it belongs in Changmin's palm.
there's something so fitting about him belonging in changmin's palm. sometimes i think changmin would like everyone to belong in the palm of his hand. :x

ah, this fits yunho so well, too xD;

[identity profile] hoyah.livejournal.com 2008-12-09 11:39 pm (UTC)(link)
i love the image in that last line!

[identity profile] kamakazza.livejournal.com 2008-12-10 12:10 am (UTC)(link)
awww sooo cuteee!!! I like it a lottt!!!

[identity profile] sunev789.livejournal.com 2008-12-10 12:18 am (UTC)(link)
THE LAST LINE! DIES ♥
So pretty~
<333

[identity profile] procreational.livejournal.com 2008-12-10 12:41 am (UTC)(link)
Changmin's head tipping onto his shoulder as Changmin curls warm and sleepy against his side
That's such a comfortable image djks I love it so.

And of course the last line is fabulous. gjkshj so good ♥

[identity profile] machine-of-july.livejournal.com 2008-12-10 12:42 am (UTC)(link)
that last line is the killer! ♥♥♥

[identity profile] kurogoma.livejournal.com 2008-12-10 12:47 am (UTC)(link)
Yunho's heart turns over like it knows it belongs in Changmin's palm.

love this line.
now all yunho has to do is figure out what he has to do next.

this drabble fits yunho so very well. ♥

[identity profile] volatileflame.livejournal.com 2008-12-10 02:43 am (UTC)(link)
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww~ <3 luvs this!

[identity profile] bubbly-blond.livejournal.com 2008-12-10 05:01 am (UTC)(link)
wow this is nice, the ending completed it nicely, I like happy stories :) (haha extremely chessy I know lol XD)

[identity profile] kuro-wolf.livejournal.com 2008-12-10 09:24 am (UTC)(link)
Hee hee, Changmin dishevels learder-shii. <3

[identity profile] wmelon-kaiye.livejournal.com 2008-12-10 12:40 pm (UTC)(link)
yessssssss, more YunMin please. <3

*adores*

[identity profile] snb123.livejournal.com 2009-04-27 08:01 am (UTC)(link)
So frickin' cute!!!