Space Invasion [drabble challenge 60: gamble]

[purplehaze-33.livejournal.com]

Title: Space Invasion
Author: Thea/purplehaze_33
Word count: 200
Concrit?: Sure, why not. 8D
Pairing: JaeMin
Rating: G
Summary: There were three steps that led to Jaejoong and Changmin falling in love. Jaejoong may or may not have been a little calculating. ;)

Space Invasion Step one is realizing you’re in love with an infuriating kid, quiet and polite to his elders. Not so around you. He jumps on top of you, dead weight on your poor bladder, positively demanding that you make him kimchee. Its only when you get up to go piss and smile dreamily, you realize you’re a sucker for that pout. Well shit, you realize belatedly, maybe you’re a little in love. Step two is a gamble, a risk, cards well-played. Fingertips moving skittishly all over his stomach, warm breath on trembling lips, breathing shallow and nervous stuttering from your space invasion; it’s when he kisses you back, shy and uncertain do you smirk at him and sigh inwardly in relief. It’s a gamble that paid well, maybe this is possible. Maybe. Step three is Changmin falling in love with his infuriating hyung; mysterious and aloof to outsiders. Not so around him. You laugh loudly and get annoyingly boisterous when he flips you off with the evil eye. Tugging him close, arms around his waist and when you kiss his lips swollen, eyes are all mismatched and happy. Well shit, he tells you belatedly, maybe I hate you just a little, hyung.

Comments

[irene014.livejournal.com]

ahhhh~ JaeMin love <3

love the last line...

[purplehaze-33.livejournal.com]

that's exactly how Changmin might confess. 8D, thank you!

[ilovefanficz.livejournal.com]

AWWWW~*!!

*hugs self dreamily*

[armstrong027.livejournal.com]

awww.SPOTTO~!

[armstrong027.livejournal.com]

aww.not first?oh well.cute fic though:D:D

Tugging him close, arms around his waist and when you kiss his lips swollen, eyes are all mismatched and happy.

aww.pure win for meeee~

[purplehaze-33.livejournal.com]

lol, its okay. :3

thank you, i liked that line myself. :')

[realitywaiting.livejournal.com]

XD That little brat! ♥

[purplehaze-33.livejournal.com]

he's very insolent. :DDD

[lovelykitten8.livejournal.com]

aaaaahhhh jaemin love lol makes me happy

[purplehaze-33.livejournal.com]

makes me happy too. 8D

[http://users.livejournal.com/_fujitsu_/]

so loooong waited JaeMin from you =)))
yatta!!!

they are beautiful =))

[purplehaze-33.livejournal.com]

really!? 8D, i'm quite happy to hear that considering i dont write them so much now. /bricked

thank youuu! :))

[http://users.livejournal.com/_fujitsu_/]

yeah, & I am really sad of it. You JaeMin pics are adorable^^

thank you for them^^

[mustenentwined3.livejournal.com]

Awww, this is adorable. I think I love step two the most - the sort of innocent yet knowing aura it has. But they're all lovely ;A; thank you so much for sharing &hearts

[purplehaze-33.livejournal.com]

i like 2 the most as well. much power to jaejoong for being brave. :3

thank you! ^_^

[xiahwase.livejournal.com]

He jumps on top of you, dead weight on your poor bladder, positively demanding that you make him kimchee.
This is a cute version of hungry!Min <3

Well shit, he tells you belatedly, maybe I hate you just a little, hyung.
W*(&#@*(@& so not true ;_; xD ♥

I love when people make Changmin a little kid, shy and kind of cute, in a grown up body. But with a tiny bit of his sarcasm <3

And yay for JaeMin ♥♥♥

[doma-arsonica.livejournal.com]

Aww this is really cute. ^___^ I like this one alot. Does this mean you're writing slash again? o.O

[mrsedjack.livejournal.com]

this is in some way really in character. :) i can just imagine that happening, especially changmin's way of confessing in the end. so sweet. very mem'worthy.

thanks for sharing. :D

[naeve14.livejournal.com]

Jaemin made me laugh like an idiot. THIS IS JAEMIN!

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[quiet-heartache.livejournal.com]

i reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally love this
so good
so so sooooo
good :D
lovely jaeminnnnnn


thanks

[chloe1910.livejournal.com]

I love how you contrast their love in a opposite way..but yet both all equally in love with each other...

[harkk.livejournal.com]

jaemin makes me smile at their dorkiness.

Tugging him close, arms around his waist and when you kiss his lips swollen, eyes are all mismatched and happy.
i absolutely heart this line! mismatched eyes ftw! XDD

personally i really heart step 3. it made me all warm and fuzzy. :D

[weerainbow.livejournal.com]

So cute!!

*pinches JaeMin's cheeks*

I love how you write them being completely themselves around each other and it leading to them falling in love...it's so sweet :o)
<33

[reya13.livejournal.com]

beautiful ^^

[winkystars.livejournal.com]

<3<3<3

Adorable and funny! ^^