crystalised. (DRABBLE CHALLENGE 145: IN A CAR)

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Title: crystalised.
Author: iluvmatsujun
Wordcount: 135
Conrit? Yes :)
Rating: PG
Summary: Changmin decides to run away.

“You sure you want to do this?” Jaejoong’s hands tighten around the steering wheel.

“Yes, I do! Hyung, I’m tired of not being able to do what I want!”

“You want to run away with me?”

“I want to be with you. Running away is the only answer.”

Jaejoong starts to hyperventilate, “We’re making a life-changing decision in my car in the middle of nowhere!”

“Yes, we are. Hyung, my parents don’t want us together, but I want to be with you.”

“What if your parents are right, and I’m bad for you? What if I can’t give you the life you want? No, the life you deserve. Changmin, this could be the worst decision of your life!”

Quietly, the younger man places his hand over Jaejoong’s, “As long as we’re together, it doesn’t matter.”

Comments

[ashleyjanee.livejournal.com]

Awwww, that's so sweet~!!!

[dulanis.livejournal.com]

I second that. So sweet....

[kawaiipinkpig.livejournal.com]

Very sweet~ ♥

A little concrit? :)

I think hand tightens should be hands tighten - it just sounds better to me.
I think something I want! should be what I want! - again, just sounds better to me. :)

Other than that, love it ;) ♥

Glaciers have melted to the sea~
I wish the tide would take me over~
I've been down on my knees~
And you just keep on getting closer~

:D

♥ xx

[iluvmatsujun.livejournal.com]

thank you so much :)

[hollyhockyuu.livejournal.com]

:< I loved it ♥ Sad and sweet, I hope they get to be together.

[keiko-kirin.livejournal.com]

I like the sense of urgency and uncertainty in this. How they are about to drive off to their unknown future, but stay together. :)

[waiting4-moon.livejournal.com]

sweeeett~~

umma, Kim jaejoong is a nice person, really >.