the first few lines were a bit awkward to get into for me (they felt kind of choppy), but once it hit It’s the intimate moments between men; secrets kept in mental shoe boxes and hidden away from seeking eyes, it felt like your fic really began to, idk, take off? like, there was a innate rhythm to your words that worked well with the easy rhythm that is homin's relationship, and your cut-off sentences really helped with that feeling.
but oh my, if yunho and changmin really were this way irl ♥ i would imagine most of their conversations would be confusing to the nearby spectator since the other person wouldn't know what's going on, lol.
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Date: 2012-01-09 12:50 am (UTC)the first few lines were a bit awkward to get into for me (they felt kind of choppy), but once it hit It’s the intimate moments between men; secrets kept in mental shoe boxes and hidden away from seeking eyes, it felt like your fic really began to, idk, take off? like, there was a innate rhythm to your words that worked well with the easy rhythm that is homin's relationship, and your cut-off sentences really helped with that feeling.
but oh my, if yunho and changmin really were this way irl ♥ i would imagine most of their conversations would be confusing to the nearby spectator since the other person wouldn't know what's going on, lol.
so much love. ♥