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Rising Sons (Flashfic Challenge 75: In My Arms)
Title: Rising Sons
Author:![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
dentedsky
Word count: 1,000
Concrit?: Yes
Pairing: HoMin
Beta:hondae ♥
When you kissed my lips with my mouth so full of questions
My worried mind that you quiet
Place your hands on my face
I could hold you in my arms
I could hold you forever
- Hold You In My Arms - Ray LaMontagne
When Changmin first met Yunho he hated him, with his stupid undercut parted-down-the-middle hair style and his baggy clothes and his incessant bad boy posing. “Hey you, come with me,” Yunho had said, striding straight into the bedroom without knocking. Changmin put down his earphones and rolled off his floor mattress and followed Yunho out with a muttered, “Yes hyung,” and privately thought, I’m dead.
Yunho shoved a video tape into the player and pressed play on the remote control, before turning around and grabbing Changmin’s shoulders, manoeuvring him awkwardly to sit on their threadbare couch. It was a live recording of a performance by Dana. “Wait for it,” Yunho said, standing to the side and jiggling his leg restlessly, “my bit’s coming up – there!” The Yunho on screen started rapping into the mic and at the camera, one hand gesticulating b-boy style. He threw Changmin a glance.
Changmin realised Yunho was looking for a response. “Looks good,” looks awful, “very professional, hyung,” why am I even here?
Yunho nodded, satisfied with this response. He pointed to the screen. “This is what you get when you work hard at something, if you’re truly dedicated.” His stare was level, his gaze hard and eyes boring into his. “If you’re not dedicated, Changmin, you may as well leave.”
Nine Years Later
Coming out of the hotel bathroom and Changmin couldn’t be bothered with sleep pants- just underwear and a t-shirt would do. The weather was warming up and – walking down past the single beds and the dressers – were his legs always this weak... no, of course not. “God I’m tired,” he muttered at the wall. The wall did not respond.
He followed the sound of the television to the sitting room and flopped down on the sofa next to Yunho, limbs splayed. He whimpered, head lolling on the couch back. Yunho groaned in reply.
“What’re’you watching?” Changmin asked.
It took a while for Yunho to respond. “I don’t know,” he said. He picked up the remote and switched it off.
A pause and then, “It’s over,” Changmin said with a sigh, eyes closing. Their Tone tour – all those long months on stage – completed. “A shower felt so good,” he added in a lower note, “almost felt like I was drowning in my own sweat there for a moment.”
No response from Yunho. Then, quietly, “Changminnie.”
“Mmm?” Changmin’s eyes fluttered open and he looked to the side. Yunho’s eyes were closed, but he was frowning, a small line down the middle of his eyebrows just visible.
“That kiss,” Yunho said.
“It wasn’t a real one,” Changmin told him hastily, snapping his teeth together and closing his eyes once again. “You needn’t... worry.”
Yunho sounded a little sad when he said, “I am worried – “
“You don’t – “
“What if we did it again?” Yunho asked, audibly swallowing. Changmin opened his eyes and looked at him.
Changmin shook his head, the back of his neck rubbing against the couch. “Tour’s over. No point.”
Yunho finally opened his own eyes and looked at him side-along, eyes heavy-lidded with fatigue and something else. Changmin lifted a hand and fiddled with his own wet fringe; it was a dark hairstyle this time, the part usually to the side but it sometimes gravitated to the middle after a shower. A shuffle, and Yunho was moving around on the couch until he was on his side facing Changmin. “We may have to do it again, later... And that kiss tonight, Changminnie, it took me by surprise.”
Changmin blinked at him. “It wasn’t even a proper kiss.”
Yunho raised his eyebrows. “And later?”
“I don’t –“ understand, he’d meant to say, but he bit the word off, because feigning ignorance would be pointless, and he did understand. The beginning of their tour had them nervous and unknowing of what the future would bring; the Bibari & Rui skit itself was so new and so frightening at first, and then after that it had sort of... run away with them, until it was nothing but energy and fun and much, much easier.
Changmin frowned. Yunho said, “Let’s practice for next time, get it over and done with. If we can get it right here and now with just the two of us, then if we do it on stage it won’t be so weird.”
Sleep was pushing in insistently, making his limbs heavy and his mind hazy. Yunho’s logic seemed without flaw, though there was a nagging feeling that he was missing something...
Oh well, he supposed that if he couldn’t figure it out, it must not be important. “Fine,” he sighed, adjusting himself so he was facing Yunho better, “go ahead. But you’re doing all the work.”
Yunho grunted in amusement as Changmin’s eyes fluttered closed and he puckered his lips slightly. He heard Yunho shuffle closer on the couch, felt it dip, then there was hesitation and... breath, warm and mint-sweet, and then –
Nothing.
Changmin’s eyes opened. He caught Yunho’s a couple of inches from his own and lifted his eyebrows in question.
Yunho’s mouth twisted. “You’re lips are all...” He gestured, fingers flicking into Changmin’s line of sight before disappearing. “Just relax.”
“Fine,” said Changmin lowly, sighing once again in exasperation as he closed his eyes and tried to relax his lips. They parted naturally and he hoped that was ok with Yunho – and it seemed to be, because he was moving again – and then Yunho’s soft, warm lips were on Changmin’s, and they were kissing chastely, hesitantly. Changmin did kiss back, just a little. Yunho pressed a little closer, fingers coming up to lightly graze Changmin’s jaw. Then Yunho moved away, and Changmin kept his eyes closed.
A minute passed and then, “Are you ok?” Yunho whispered.
“Tired,” said Changmin, voice raspy. He willed his heart to slow.
Two hours later Changmin awoke on the couch with his feet freezing and chest warm and his arms full of Yunho. Red-blonde hair in his face made him snuffle, and Yunho stirred, waking with a moaned, “What...” and Changmin shushed him.
He held him a little tighter and Yunho shuffled back a little to press himself closer. They commanded sleep, and sleep came once again and took them away.
End.
Author:
dentedskyWord count: 1,000
Concrit?: Yes
Pairing: HoMin
Beta:
hondae ♥When you kissed my lips with my mouth so full of questions
My worried mind that you quiet
Place your hands on my face
I could hold you in my arms
I could hold you forever
- Hold You In My Arms - Ray LaMontagne
*
When Changmin first met Yunho he hated him, with his stupid undercut parted-down-the-middle hair style and his baggy clothes and his incessant bad boy posing. “Hey you, come with me,” Yunho had said, striding straight into the bedroom without knocking. Changmin put down his earphones and rolled off his floor mattress and followed Yunho out with a muttered, “Yes hyung,” and privately thought, I’m dead.
Yunho shoved a video tape into the player and pressed play on the remote control, before turning around and grabbing Changmin’s shoulders, manoeuvring him awkwardly to sit on their threadbare couch. It was a live recording of a performance by Dana. “Wait for it,” Yunho said, standing to the side and jiggling his leg restlessly, “my bit’s coming up – there!” The Yunho on screen started rapping into the mic and at the camera, one hand gesticulating b-boy style. He threw Changmin a glance.
Changmin realised Yunho was looking for a response. “Looks good,” looks awful, “very professional, hyung,” why am I even here?
Yunho nodded, satisfied with this response. He pointed to the screen. “This is what you get when you work hard at something, if you’re truly dedicated.” His stare was level, his gaze hard and eyes boring into his. “If you’re not dedicated, Changmin, you may as well leave.”
*
Nine Years Later
Coming out of the hotel bathroom and Changmin couldn’t be bothered with sleep pants- just underwear and a t-shirt would do. The weather was warming up and – walking down past the single beds and the dressers – were his legs always this weak... no, of course not. “God I’m tired,” he muttered at the wall. The wall did not respond.
He followed the sound of the television to the sitting room and flopped down on the sofa next to Yunho, limbs splayed. He whimpered, head lolling on the couch back. Yunho groaned in reply.
“What’re’you watching?” Changmin asked.
It took a while for Yunho to respond. “I don’t know,” he said. He picked up the remote and switched it off.
A pause and then, “It’s over,” Changmin said with a sigh, eyes closing. Their Tone tour – all those long months on stage – completed. “A shower felt so good,” he added in a lower note, “almost felt like I was drowning in my own sweat there for a moment.”
No response from Yunho. Then, quietly, “Changminnie.”
“Mmm?” Changmin’s eyes fluttered open and he looked to the side. Yunho’s eyes were closed, but he was frowning, a small line down the middle of his eyebrows just visible.
“That kiss,” Yunho said.
“It wasn’t a real one,” Changmin told him hastily, snapping his teeth together and closing his eyes once again. “You needn’t... worry.”
Yunho sounded a little sad when he said, “I am worried – “
“You don’t – “
“What if we did it again?” Yunho asked, audibly swallowing. Changmin opened his eyes and looked at him.
Changmin shook his head, the back of his neck rubbing against the couch. “Tour’s over. No point.”
Yunho finally opened his own eyes and looked at him side-along, eyes heavy-lidded with fatigue and something else. Changmin lifted a hand and fiddled with his own wet fringe; it was a dark hairstyle this time, the part usually to the side but it sometimes gravitated to the middle after a shower. A shuffle, and Yunho was moving around on the couch until he was on his side facing Changmin. “We may have to do it again, later... And that kiss tonight, Changminnie, it took me by surprise.”
Changmin blinked at him. “It wasn’t even a proper kiss.”
Yunho raised his eyebrows. “And later?”
“I don’t –“ understand, he’d meant to say, but he bit the word off, because feigning ignorance would be pointless, and he did understand. The beginning of their tour had them nervous and unknowing of what the future would bring; the Bibari & Rui skit itself was so new and so frightening at first, and then after that it had sort of... run away with them, until it was nothing but energy and fun and much, much easier.
Changmin frowned. Yunho said, “Let’s practice for next time, get it over and done with. If we can get it right here and now with just the two of us, then if we do it on stage it won’t be so weird.”
Sleep was pushing in insistently, making his limbs heavy and his mind hazy. Yunho’s logic seemed without flaw, though there was a nagging feeling that he was missing something...
Oh well, he supposed that if he couldn’t figure it out, it must not be important. “Fine,” he sighed, adjusting himself so he was facing Yunho better, “go ahead. But you’re doing all the work.”
Yunho grunted in amusement as Changmin’s eyes fluttered closed and he puckered his lips slightly. He heard Yunho shuffle closer on the couch, felt it dip, then there was hesitation and... breath, warm and mint-sweet, and then –
Nothing.
Changmin’s eyes opened. He caught Yunho’s a couple of inches from his own and lifted his eyebrows in question.
Yunho’s mouth twisted. “You’re lips are all...” He gestured, fingers flicking into Changmin’s line of sight before disappearing. “Just relax.”
“Fine,” said Changmin lowly, sighing once again in exasperation as he closed his eyes and tried to relax his lips. They parted naturally and he hoped that was ok with Yunho – and it seemed to be, because he was moving again – and then Yunho’s soft, warm lips were on Changmin’s, and they were kissing chastely, hesitantly. Changmin did kiss back, just a little. Yunho pressed a little closer, fingers coming up to lightly graze Changmin’s jaw. Then Yunho moved away, and Changmin kept his eyes closed.
A minute passed and then, “Are you ok?” Yunho whispered.
“Tired,” said Changmin, voice raspy. He willed his heart to slow.
Two hours later Changmin awoke on the couch with his feet freezing and chest warm and his arms full of Yunho. Red-blonde hair in his face made him snuffle, and Yunho stirred, waking with a moaned, “What...” and Changmin shushed him.
He held him a little tighter and Yunho shuffled back a little to press himself closer. They commanded sleep, and sleep came once again and took them away.
End.
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short but really sweet<3
somehow hoping this could be longer :P
make me wonder what really happen with them right after they finish the last day..
did Yunho ask about that almost kiss lol xD
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seriously Changmin is really unpredicatable, he is the one against this gag in the beginning and Yunho only making this gag really cute but once Changmin decide to turn the table and making it Minho version, the Bibarui gag keep on getting more and more intense and sexy while Homin version is more cute childish like...
but Minho version is totally dangerous since Changmin is in full seducing and attacking mode making Yunho kinda restless and caught off guard everytime because he himself like all the fan don't know what move Changmin would do next lol :P
and the last day is the best one because Changmin taking the gag into whole new level maybe because that is the last one so hi decide to do full force fan service :P
seriously i am really curious with what in that boy head, he of all people always against doing fan service like this and he really didn't have to take it this far as well since he doesn't seem to mind to not listening to fan request and can make them shut up anytime but why he instead is the one initiating this and seem too excited for this lol :P
like during 1st day Tokyo Dome seem like Yunho don't want to do the gag anymore maybe because the ir parent is there but Changmin is the one suggesting they do it..
ahhhhh seriously even if i don't want to ship them more than brother but kind of thing really make me hard to resist this pair especially Changmin seem more open nowadays showing his love to his hyung while Yunho adoration for him is the ost obvious thing in planet earth :P
lol now this become like essay :P
yeah really want to know what type of convo they have after that lol :P
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True true, what really got to me is that after this bit they moved away from each other and Yunho was kind of... rubbing his chest where his heart is kkkk. And he wouldn't look at Changmin. Mind you, he was MC-ing at the time so I'm not sure what he was saying... but he looked a bit... overwhelmed? lol. Yes a friend made me realise that while the homin one is cute, it's the minho one that is so intense because Yunho doesn't run away unlike Changmin during homin.
It's definitely interesting because previously I had assumed Changmin hated fanservice, but here he is making all these lust-filled moves - kiss, eyesex, heavy breathing - LOL!
Yunho adoration for him is the ost obvious thing in planet earth
="DDD So many feelings~
LOL it's ok, essays are good!
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someone seriously need to make me gifs icon for that scene so i could use it please<3
haha Yunho totally still in shock mode lol and don't know how to react and keep on looking in front..
he can't even looking at Minnie face while that brat act like nothing happen, such a tease and big troll lol :P
yeah he is totally overwhelmed at that moment and kinda flustered..
yeah the Homin one is very cute and kinda innocent with Changmin being shy and running away so it never go too far and just for laugh..
but once Changmin did it the atmosphere totally change 360degree..
it just so intense, hot, sexy, full of sexual tension of those 2, though Yunho being super shy but he don't want to run away because im sure he totally secretly enjoying the rare moment Changmin initiating skinship for him lol :P
yeah Changmin have made himself a very strong image of hating fanservice and showing skinship in front of fans this past years so im really surprised with how much he change since he seem to be enjoying this gag more than he supposed to lol...
i know he can easily ignore the fans request and skip doing the gag because the fans know he is lord-voldermin that can control the situation to his favor no matter how many thousand fans booing him but why oh why he still want to do the gag if he not secretly enjoying every single moment of that :P
yeah he still complaining about doing this kind of gag to make money during the MC but still that doesn't stop him from doing that gag over and over again especially showing that horny face, with eye full of lust etc for his HYUNG and that just to damn hot and im sure he is fully aware what kind of effect that is to kill every fangirl and even poor Yunho lol xD
haha i think Yunho love for Changmin is too damn obvious it is not even subtle that anyone can see and feel lol...
i don't know it just love for friend, or brother or partner or more than that but it definitely full of love that he always seem so happy and glowing everytime he is around Changmin :P
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Yunho really is flustered lol he's totally beside himself. But mostly I'd just love to read a translation of those scenes, he's says Changmin's name in a sentence while hitting his heart - I want to knooowwww >.< But I think it's just lines of the skit. Still...!
I don't think I ever saw the fancam of it, but I love the pics, of an early homin where afterwards Changmin chased after Yunho on stage and they both looked like "XD tee hee". I think Changmin wanted to beat him up but it was still very cute, reminded me of kids playing kiss-chasey. But yeah in minho, Yunho only moves away when he knows Changmin is finished XD like he wants Changmin to move away first... he doesn't want to end it himself XD
Yes there is of course the famous lines Changmin has said to Jaejoong in the past... "I don't like skinship" and "I don't love men" etc... but I have heard opinions from older fans (I'm kind of new) that homin sort of had fanservice and skinship before. I'm not sure if it was ignored by fans or perhaps cut from final edits later (or both).
But yeah the eyesex *flail* as you say, I really want to know what's going through that boy's head! Saying he doesn't want to do it.... only to do it unfailingly and with enthusiasm. Perhaps he truly has become a fantastic actor, because... well, he's really good at it!! LOL. I wonder if they do enjoy it... I think at least on one level, they enjoy all the screams of the females (and males keke) in the audience. Changmin said in an interview once, that he wants to hear the cheers get louder and louder... like he wants to make everyone screeeaamm and I think... they both get a little carried away in the moment LOL!
I'm sure they love each other very much... platonic love XD but still love. There was an interview recently where I believe Yunho said that for him, the word that comes to mind when he thinks of Changmin is 'home' ="> It's rare to see them apart, but when you do they seem a bit... lost? I dunno.
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Lol sorry to intrude on you two's conversation like this but I haven't really been keeping up with the Tone Tour.
Did the "kiss" mentioned in the story happen in real life? Is there a video of it?
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And the moments at the Tone tour...ohhhh I can just imagine that exact thing happening! I wanna see them kiiiiiisssss...fanservice or not, I just want to SEE it! Changminnie is such a tease with that air-kiss. But damn it was hot. The discussions above were great, I agree with everything. Had Changmin not took initiative with that gag, it would have stayed fun and innocent. But MinHo burns through the computer screens I tell you. It BUUUUURNS.
hehehe! :DDD
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