ext_105071 ([identity profile] halfkissed.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] dbsk_flashfic2008-04-18 08:57 pm

Loud and Clear :: response to drabble challenge 10: oyaji gags

Title: Loud and Clear
Author: [profile] dbdbyeah  [ yes, this is still me, i promise. c: ]
Word Count: 200 words
Concrit?: yes please.
Pairing: Yoochun / Changmin

A/N: [edited] i didn't know how to handle oyaji gags so........ i tried to work around saying/hearing something as one thing, and then when you say/hear the same thing a bit differently, it could actually mean something else. eeeeee i suck at life? yessss.

A/N2: this is also for my yoomin muse [profile] foolishlovexo , welcome back dongsaeng. c:



The first time Yoochun hears it from Changmin, it sounds more like an assortment of hums than a group of words. Changmin blurts it out so fast that Yoochun fails to catch it. (He thinks Changmin is talking to himself again, murmuring information spilling out from his over-filled brain.)



The second time Changmin manages to find him and say it, Yoochun is too busy worrying about the last few lines of a new song he is working on. He nods his head absent mindedly, and he doesn’t see how pale Changmin has become.

After Changmin exhales, he turns and walks out the door quietly.

Yoochun makes his way to the kitchen a few minutes later, only to find it empty. I thought he said dinner was ready?



The next time is the last time.

Changmin tells Yoochun with his lips and his hands. Yoochun replies with labored breaths and his heart thumping in his chest. He is up against the wall and Yoochun thinks, Oh… OH.

The confession continues to hang in the air between them as they pull away. This time, Yoochun catches it with a smile against Changmin’s lips.

I love you too, Min.


You’re so slow, hyung.


[identity profile] wmelon-kaiye.livejournal.com 2008-04-18 01:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Chun is EVIL.
EVIL. He's my pimp. &hearts
Really, corrupting our innocent baby Min and then groping Kamo-arse...?
XD

Nice fic. :)

[identity profile] wmelon-kaiye.livejournal.com 2008-04-18 01:24 pm (UTC)(link)
HAHAHHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAH
OMGOSH, I haven't seen that picture. Wth? I'm really out of it. Oh god. But that is GOOD.

Chun is passed around. XD

[identity profile] wmelon-kaiye.livejournal.com 2008-04-18 01:25 pm (UTC)(link)
from the looks of it... that was around STEP BY STEP?
Gosh. The seeds of corruption run long and deep. XD

[identity profile] morninglory17.livejournal.com 2008-04-18 01:51 pm (UTC)(link)
OMGMGMGM HAHA. I love I love I love it! That was awesome. I squeezed my eyes shut and squealed.>.< -o- Yoochun is seriously retarded sometimes.

[identity profile] morninglory17.livejournal.com 2008-04-18 02:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, I HOPE they care about each other deeply if they're gonna grope like that. haha.

[identity profile] ara-niey.livejournal.com 2008-04-19 03:18 am (UTC)(link)
haha!~poor min..*sigh*

chun IS damn slow..keke~

[identity profile] foolishlovexo.livejournal.com 2008-04-19 06:39 pm (UTC)(link)
AHH! Why do I always miss the good stuff!

I LOVED THIS!! Yoochun is so slow! It's a good thing Min never gives up. xD
ahaha, I'm the YooMin muse...still don't know how that happened ><

ilu!<3

[identity profile] ara-niey.livejournal.com 2008-04-20 05:35 am (UTC)(link)
hmmm..up to you dear~♥

[identity profile] noelledominique.livejournal.com 2008-04-23 04:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Ugh, this hurts. I want to smack Yoochun for being so stupid. xD ♥ Really liked it.

[identity profile] chloe1910.livejournal.com 2008-04-25 11:09 am (UTC)(link)
I lurve it....hubby!!!! *smack dense Yoochun for Minboy!