ext_70966 ([identity profile] sleepish.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] dbsk_flashfic2008-05-10 12:07 pm
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number two pencil. (drabble challenge 13: light)

title number two pencil (aka. smooth criminal)
author [livejournal.com profile] sunfever.
word count 100.
concrit hit me.
pairing changmin, jaejoong.
a/n dbsk meets death note, because [livejournal.com profile] wmelon_kaiye suggested it.



Changmin's hand hurts.

"Are you giving up?" Jaejoong asks.

"No," Changmin says. He turns to a new sheet in the notebook.

Jaejoong sits on his windowsill with an apple. The only outside light that reaches the room is what filters around his dark-clothed body. He asks, "Are you tired?"

Aggravated murder case. Shot his girlfriend twice, loaded her into the trunk of his car, alive, and drove her to the river.

Jaejoong bites into his apple. Are you tired?

Changmin looks at the first name written on the white page. He doesn't count the forty seconds anymore, only begins another.


[identity profile] pureuda.livejournal.com 2008-05-10 04:28 pm (UTC)(link)
psodmgspodfmsdf I think I died ♥

[identity profile] kallistei.livejournal.com 2008-05-10 04:31 pm (UTC)(link)
♥ I think it needs an aka. :))))

[identity profile] kallistei.livejournal.com 2008-05-10 04:35 pm (UTC)(link)
number two pencil, aka smooth criminal.

:|

[identity profile] kallistei.livejournal.com 2008-05-10 04:37 pm (UTC)(link)
! Wasn't an entirely serious suggestion. XD

[identity profile] kallistei.livejournal.com 2008-05-10 04:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Of course you are. :|

[identity profile] xiahtic.livejournal.com 2008-05-10 05:43 pm (UTC)(link)
oh.

my.

fucking.

god.

linda. what. just. sdjkfh ♥♥♥ holyfuckyes.

[identity profile] indifferance.livejournal.com 2008-05-10 06:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Awesome!
<3<3<3<3

A vengeful Changmin is Hot! Nya death to us all!

[identity profile] wmelon-kaiye.livejournal.com 2008-05-11 09:34 am (UTC)(link)
WHAT THE HELL
LOL
OMG *flails flails flails* ILU SO MUCH, YOU ARE TOTALLY MY HERO. <3

*snuggles*

*showers you with cookies* D:
&hearts &hearts &hearts
ext_32036: (jaemin: the great question)

[identity profile] onew.livejournal.com 2008-05-12 06:39 am (UTC)(link)

wow. just. wow.