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Title: elementary waltz on 3/4
Author: Reeza ([livejournal.com profile] aoireeza)
Word count: 100 words
Concrit?: Sure. :D
Pairing: JaeSu
Rating: PG
Summary: You can never blame gravity for two people falling in love. Cliché, but true. (for [livejournal.com profile] dbsk_flashfic @ drabble challenge 28: slide)


You're dancing - like swans and birds do, he tells you as he takes your hand and twirls you until the only thing you can make out is his smile in certain circles. He's on his toes, spinning, and you wonder briefly if this is how the world revolves - on one foot, almost falling, just almost, but not quite. Then he takes the risk, spins faster and misses the part where you say Stop! He never listens.

So when he slips, you catch him, and you fall together. You called, he asks. You shake your head.

I saved you.

Date: 2008-09-10 01:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fauxflair.livejournal.com
short, but really really sweet. ♥♥♥~

Date: 2008-09-10 01:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] halfkissed.livejournal.com
i miss you oh so effin much. D:

Date: 2008-09-10 01:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silhouettedwing.livejournal.com
beautiful. as always.

Date: 2008-09-10 07:19 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-09-10 08:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] imaii.livejournal.com
sweet! ♥

Date: 2008-09-11 12:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emda.livejournal.com
Oh Dear
this is so beautiful!!!!

Date: 2008-09-16 03:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emda.livejournal.com
EVIL CLASSES ARE SUCKING MY TIME!!!!!! I tell you Im gonna ninja snap at those classes but but... I'll try to catch up with you!!!

Date: 2008-09-11 11:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] graveyardgrin.livejournal.com
Oh Jaesu♥ Love the last line (:

Date: 2008-09-13 07:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] afruz.livejournal.com
Trying to figure out what 'on 3/4' means. It can't be date, right?

My fav line: you wonder briefly if this is how the world revolves - on one foot, almost falling, just almost, but not quite. <3

Date: 2008-09-15 11:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oldwillow-brook.livejournal.com
Can I explain?

With music a 3/4 is a time signature. Waltz's are usually performed or composed on a 3/4 time signature.(Usually, sometimes people go crazy and sometimes do it on 4/4. Which can be really akward)

Example: You would count: 1,2,3 1,2,3 instead of the usual 1,2,3,4 1,2,3,4.

So Jaejoong and Junsu are waltzing. It's fast pace but a waltz around each other nonetheless.

I hope that helps! :D

Date: 2008-09-16 06:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] afruz.livejournal.com
Oh! Thank you very much!

It seems like we count 1,2,3 5,6,7,8 with a salsa (leaving 4 between). Now I know it is called 3/4. :D

Thank you again, it did help a lot! <3

Date: 2008-09-16 05:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oldwillow-brook.livejournal.com
Salsa was always confusing without the 4. I would say it out loud and the salsa teacher would yell,"NO FOUR!" I think it traumatized me a bit. O.o

Date: 2008-09-16 07:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] afruz.livejournal.com
XD
We started with 1,2,3 1,2,3 as a beginner, then later when we were learning the complex figures (I dunno if it is a right word in English), we changed counting till 8 leaving out the 4.

Ah, so wish to spam here more with you about a salsa. <3

Butbutbut..

Reeza, dear, it is your own fault that you had such an amazing title to your piece. :D
<3

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