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Title: This is a perception problem.
Author: [livejournal.com profile] essyllus
Word count: 100
Concrit?: of course!


He was always a bit careless. Losing his keys, losing his balance, losing the tempo when they were supposed to sing a capella, together, and not un-together, like Jaejoong tends to do when his mind wanders.

“Keys?” he’ll say, ’cause Jaejoong’s always been a little mouthy, “You’ve got the keys to my heart,” and you’ll never disagree with his logic like that; that balance is a matter of happiness tumbled upside down on a morning like this, all clumsy and fleshy and humming, when your hearts beat all together, and not un-together.


“I’m careful with you,” he’ll concede, and laugh.

Date: 2008-09-10 08:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quiet-heartache.livejournal.com
^^ <3 'that balance is a matter of happiness tumbled upside down on a morning like this, all clumsy and fleshy and humming, when their hearts beat all together, and not un-together.'

thanks

Date: 2008-09-11 06:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ruinedempires.livejournal.com
enjoyed all 100 words as they all counted. thanks for sharing.

Date: 2008-09-12 07:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rememberwhy.livejournal.com
*3*

It has such a lovely warm feeling of friendship and love. ♥

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