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Title: All the words we need
Author: Thea/ [livejournal.com profile] purplehaze_33
Pairing: Jaesu
Word Count: 99
Genre: Romance
Concrit: of course, i like it hard:P
Summary: Let these looks, touches, smiles be all the words for us, jaejoong. they're all the words we need.


 

 

concern flashing in those warm brown eyes is all it takes for junsu to break down and clutch on desperately to the other’s night shirt. Strong arms wrap around trembling shoulders, holding on, steadily, never letting go, not wanting to, ever.

 

the last of my defenses are shed when it comes to you, joongie, how can i, when my heart lies in these gentle, caring fingertips wiping away the tears kept in for so long?

 

Words need not be said because a look, a touch, a smile are all the words we need.

 

They’re all the words we need.


 

Date: 2008-10-02 02:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darknessgryphon.livejournal.com
oh now that's pretty jaesu~

The one thing I would say as far as concrit is that there's a bit of an awkward shift between the first kinda-paragraph to the second, as it, The first paragraph at least feels like it's in third person while the second is in first?

Ooh, but it is pretty.. and secret ;) like the jaesu i love and know~

Date: 2008-10-02 02:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pinkfluffies.livejournal.com
homg. ♥♥♥

Date: 2008-10-03 11:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pinkfluffies.livejournal.com
^^

what jaesu?

Date: 2008-10-02 04:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quiet-heartache.livejournal.com
'all the words we need' - amen to that <3

sweeet

thanks

Date: 2008-10-06 12:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emda.livejournal.com
LOVELY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I Love you!!!!

Date: 2008-10-06 12:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emda.livejournal.com
I need some more begging LOL kidding
I will try... any demands?

Date: 2008-10-06 12:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emda.livejournal.com
ooohhh
so u want Jaesu smut lol
I'll try

Date: 2008-10-06 01:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emda.livejournal.com
I can deal better smut than fluff so dont worry... Jaesu smut is on the making

Date: 2008-10-06 01:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angeldan27.livejournal.com
this is even more love.
argh!
i want more!
thank you! <333

Date: 2008-10-06 03:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angeldan27.livejournal.com
oooh. i'm happy with jaesu for the moment... lol...
i've been converted by the baker's son... and your awesome fics! <3333
oh, really? you'll write me something... hmmm....
let me see...
no dirty smut.
bedroom + affectionate + lovely smut... maybe a little kink of... recording the whole thing?
bwahahaha!
idk. xD

Date: 2008-10-06 03:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kage12.livejournal.com
Again, lovely. So sweet. My teeth are hurting today. I'm in the sappy mood. XD

Date: 2008-10-06 04:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] boojaesubabe.livejournal.com
I think I just consumed a spoon full of sugar ^___^

Date: 2008-10-06 08:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kuro-wolf.livejournal.com
Awe.. Jaesu. I really like the last line. :D

Date: 2008-10-07 02:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kiomi-hakuri.livejournal.com
so true..
the words no need *-----------*

I loved and I love u <3
and.. I love JaeSu =D

Dan <3

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