all the words we need

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Title: All the words we need
Author: Thea/ purplehaze_33
Pairing: Jaesu
Word Count: 99
Genre: Romance
Concrit: of course, i like it hard:P
Summary: Let these looks, touches, smiles be all the words for us, jaejoong. they're all the words we need.

 

 

concern flashing in those warm brown eyes is all it takes for junsu to break down and clutch on desperately to the other’s night shirt. Strong arms wrap around trembling shoulders, holding on, steadily, never letting go, not wanting to, ever.

 

the last of my defenses are shed when it comes to you, joongie, how can i, when my heart lies in these gentle, caring fingertips wiping away the tears kept in for so long?

 

Words need not be said because a look, a touch, a smile are all the words we need.

 

They’re all the words we need.

 

Comments

[darknessgryphon.livejournal.com]

oh now that's pretty jaesu~

The one thing I would say as far as concrit is that there's a bit of an awkward shift between the first kinda-paragraph to the second, as it, The first paragraph at least feels like it's in third person while the second is in first?

Ooh, but it is pretty.. and secret ;) like the jaesu i love and know~

[purplehaze-33.livejournal.com]

lol, i have a habit for switching from third to first and second to first, all the time.

its when i want to emphasize on their thought, basically, but thank you♥

[pinkfluffies.livejournal.com]

homg. ♥♥♥

[purplehaze-33.livejournal.com]

back atcha♥♥♥

loved that jaesu even i already commented on it:))

[pinkfluffies.livejournal.com]

^^

what jaesu?

[quiet-heartache.livejournal.com]

'all the words we need' - amen to that <3

sweeet

thanks

[purplehaze-33.livejournal.com]

thank you:)))

[emda.livejournal.com]

LOVELY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I Love you!!!!

[purplehaze-33.livejournal.com]

LOL

i read your comments just now and i lub you too♥

your jaesu is so win, i want more:((

please write one for me, please bb?

*big puppy eyes*

[emda.livejournal.com]

I need some more begging LOL kidding
I will try... any demands?

[purplehaze-33.livejournal.com]

YAYYY SHE'S GONNA DO IT.

VICTORY IS MINE.

MUAHAHAHAHAHA

requirements: jaesu, happy, smexy, happy, seme!jae, hot uke!su, some riding, some humping, happy, jaesu you know the deal=PPPP

[emda.livejournal.com]

ooohhh
so u want Jaesu smut lol
I'll try

[purplehaze-33.livejournal.com]

if its not too much trouble, yes please:))

or even just fluffy jaesu will make my day, it doesnt really matter♥

[emda.livejournal.com]

I can deal better smut than fluff so dont worry... Jaesu smut is on the making

[purplehaze-33.livejournal.com]

hwaiting!!

*__*

[angeldan27.livejournal.com]

this is even more love.
argh!
i want more!
thank you! <333

[purplehaze-33.livejournal.com]

you want more?

you just had to say so:DDD

want smth in particular?

challenge me.

it neednt be only jaesu.

im a HUGE homin, jaemin and jaeho fan[seme!jae ftwxDDDD] too.

just know.

i fail at dirty smut>.<

and if there is any other pairing you want, just tell me and lemme see what i can whip up for ya:)))

[angeldan27.livejournal.com]

oooh. i'm happy with jaesu for the moment... lol...
i've been converted by the baker's son... and your awesome fics! <3333
oh, really? you'll write me something... hmmm....
let me see...
no dirty smut.
bedroom + affectionate + lovely smut... maybe a little kink of... recording the whole thing?
bwahahaha!
idk. xD

[kage12.livejournal.com]

Again, lovely. So sweet. My teeth are hurting today. I'm in the sappy mood. XD

[boojaesubabe.livejournal.com]

I think I just consumed a spoon full of sugar ^___^

[kuro-wolf.livejournal.com]

Awe.. Jaesu. I really like the last line. :D

[kiomi-hakuri.livejournal.com]

so true..
the words no need *-----------*

I loved and I love u <3
and.. I love JaeSu =D

Dan <3