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Title: Command
Author: [livejournal.com profile] kannuki_neru
Word count: 100
Concrit?: Appreciated!
Pairing: Jaeho
Rating: pg-13
Summary: Jaejoong knows how to talk in words the leader will obey.



It works almost like a reverse effect.
Yunho says: Stop
Jaejoong touches.
Yunho says: You can’t be enjoying this.
Jaejoong moans.
Yunho thinks: I don’t want to believe it.
Jaejoong kisses him.
The secret is that Yunho doesn’t want to stop, enjoys it even more than Jaejoong and believes it more than anything.
The catch is that Yunho has learnt his lesson well and can tell love and responsibilities apart. In most cases, they should go together. In this case, they don’t.
Jaejoong knows how to talk in words the leader will obey.
‘You are responsible for letting me love.’

Date: 2008-10-05 03:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] purplehaze-33.livejournal.com


beautifully done:))

Date: 2008-10-05 04:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quiet-heartache.livejournal.com
woah. killer end line <3

reaaaaaally cool. unusual format, i like

thanks

Date: 2008-10-05 10:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] may-song.livejournal.com
Insanely hot stuff!

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