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Title: First Date.
Author: [livejournal.com profile] cmplctd
Word count: 100.
Concrit?: sure.
Pairing: Jaesu, Minsu.
Rating: PG13.
Summary: Changmin can't do anything but watch him from afar.


“Ready?” Jaejoong smiled.

Junsu sat next to his boyfriend, gently nodded, and submerged himself between Jaejoong’s lips. They exchanged feather-like kisses; their arms wrapped around each other.

Changmin spied on the love birds from his room. He was no doubt happy for the them, but he wanted to be the one holding Junsu; he wanted to kiss and love him like no other. All he could do was watch.

Take care of him. Changmin whispered. Jaejoong took Junsu’s hand, exactly as he would‘ve.

They walked hand in hand into the night. Changmin hated to admit that they looked perfect together.

Date: 2008-10-21 08:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kuro-wolf.livejournal.com
Sigh.. im sorry Minnie but Jaesu really do look perfect for each other. (very biased opinion from me cos im a Jaesu fan XD)

Date: 2008-10-21 09:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wmelon-kaiye.livejournal.com
Hate to butt in on any conversations but what about Jaemin? XD
I adore Jaemin (but then again, I'm an OT5 whore so I think the boys look perfect together no matter how you mash them ;D)

*sighs*
Ugh, the heartbreak. D:

Date: 2008-10-21 10:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] helle-reen.livejournal.com
ahh.. sad drabble.
but still - ♥

Date: 2008-10-22 08:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] helle-reen.livejournal.com
yep, they good ))
and Min's destined to Yun Ho, hehe ♥

p.s.
i simply adore your icon ♥

p.p.s.
and i finally that meme you've tagged me ))) sorry for taking so long.

Date: 2008-10-22 09:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] helle-reen.livejournal.com
xDDDDDD
i still prefer HoMin ))))

ah, i want to see BB's Come to play too, i've even downloaded it ))) but this week i'm watching Family Outing, all the episodes with guests i know ))) this show is simply hilarious )))

Date: 2008-10-21 10:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chloe1910.livejournal.com
Ouch..that was painful....

Date: 2008-10-21 11:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aiko103.livejournal.com
it's sad..
but i love it..

in my opinion.. Junsu looks good with every one -___-"

Date: 2008-10-21 06:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aiko103.livejournal.com
agree.. since we always see them together...
hehe...
I'm being bias just now -_____-"

Date: 2008-10-21 01:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coolplastic19.livejournal.com
D: Awwww..... MinSu's always broken up ToT

Date: 2008-10-21 01:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angeldan27.livejournal.com
damn painful.
but <3
(deleted comment)

Date: 2008-10-21 05:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] purplehaze-33.livejournal.com
so short but sweet♥~

i love the jaesu going on but i feel for min:(((

Date: 2008-10-21 08:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mrs-min-ai.livejournal.com
guhh~ how could you do this to me! i love my jaesu... but then you want to go hurt my minsu!!! D: i'm conflicted. =[ but this was still good~♥

Date: 2008-10-21 11:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baboboy.livejournal.com
Jaesu!! :D they do look good together! ♥

Date: 2008-10-21 11:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ttaejoong-hyuk.livejournal.com
T__T....b-b-b-but...i l-l-ove minsu!!!! T_T haha, i guess i got a flushot for the jaesu virus...i'm not infected..XD

Date: 2008-10-25 08:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ttaejoong-hyuk.livejournal.com
XD semi-promise!!!! ahaha, then i semi-hold you to that!!! ahaha....yay....someone misses them too!!!

yeaaa...i got that on my last doctor's appointment...ahaha

Date: 2008-10-22 05:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kiomi-hakuri.livejournal.com
aww poor minnie.. but yes..
they do look good together! ♥

Changmin you go to yoochun ok? xD

(I loved kiss couple xD) <3

kisses for all =D

Dan

Date: 2008-10-22 05:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaedonluv.livejournal.com
Aigoo Minnie.. TT^TT

Yes Jaesu is perfect but.. I like Jaemin too =/ Hard to decide which to choose =S

Hmmm.. how about a threesome? xP

Wonderful piece! Sad but yea, wonderful^^ *applause*

Date: 2008-10-23 07:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] swallowtt.livejournal.com
poor minnie. *sigh* as long as su is happy...i guess it's okay. ^___^

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