distance covered in minutes (drabble challenge 38: foreign)

[procreational.livejournal.com]

Title: distance covered in minutes
Author: procreational
Pairing: Junsu/Yunho
Word count: 100
Rating: G
Concrit?: Yes please, I love concrit!
Summary: Though it doesn't make it any easier to bridge.
Notes: Recently joined, and this is my offering?


Junsu thinks about it first, questions it second; he’s been doing some growing up lately, some reshuffling of morals.

-- thinks about how masculine Yunho is, how different it is from liking a girl. Questions it a second later: how different is it really?

Thinks about reaching out a hand on stage, or even at home, but could he really do that? Would he ever?

Junsu thinks about it first (I could want you, he allows, trying the weight of the words on his tongue), questions it second (could I want you?), but he still can’t think of an answer.

Comments

[trajectory.livejournal.com]

llkjglkjdfgfd clare.

[trajectory.livejournal.com]

where did my comments go T_T

[procreational.livejournal.com]

o m g tilly I am serious. >:( leave me some concrit or something meaningful!! I am trying to leave a good impression here!!

[trajectory.livejournal.com]

dies ok clare i like all your fics! aslkdjf they flow perfectly and have just the right amount of bitchiness :3 and thinks about how masculine Yunho is, how different it is from liking a girl. ugh i love that, most fics don't mention how different being with someone of the same sex is but it fucking is and i go :D every time a fic i read mentions it and I DON'T THINK EMOTICONS REALLY EQUAL MEANINGFUL CONCRIT but i love you a lot and this fic is gorgeous and i commented before tori so i'm cool :D

[chinapaper.livejournal.com]

WHERE IS MY FAVOURITE >:(


but in all seriousness, ♥. esp. for the last line *__* daisuki dayo claresuka

[procreational.livejournal.com]

Thank you Tori~ gjkd the last line took me five years to write/fit into the word count?

[chinapaper.livejournal.com]

ugh, that's why i don't do drabbles @__@

[ruinedempires.livejournal.com]

the answer is yes, junsu. yes, you could want yuhno. yes, you should want yuhno.

this is lovely. thank you for giving voice to the pairing that suddenly ate my brain.

[procreational.livejournal.com]

:) Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've only recently warmed up to the idea of Junsu and Yunho, but they're adorable.

[xiahtic.livejournal.com]

ooooh, a lovely little drabble ♥ i like how you kind of keep it open, like junsu's thinking, but never actually outright denies or accepts loving yunho as more than a friend. *___*

[procreational.livejournal.com]

dgshkj :D thank you! ♥ I find Junsu so Christian sometimes that it almost makes it hard for me to really ship him. This started out Yoosu before I was like -- wait, Chun's not that manly... :|

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

I liked this a lot :) It seems very Junsu to me, somehow.

[procreational.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :) I actually feel like Junsu is least pair-able, but that also makes him most interesting to write?

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I get what you mean. Although I just find Junsu difficult always XD

[procreational.livejournal.com]

djkhg this is true. Although considering I've only recently started liking DBSK, all of them are pretty difficult...

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

:) New converts are always good.

[kayjayloves.livejournal.com]

owaa, i like this. there's something so important touched on in just a 100 words ♥

[procreational.livejournal.com]

djgk thank you so much! ♥

[quiet-heartache.livejournal.com]

leave me hanging why donchaaaaaa

'Junsu thinks about it first (I could want you, he allows, trying the weight of the words on his tongue), questions it second (could I want you?), but he still can’t think of an answer.' - *edge of seat* WANT HIM. WANNNNNTTTT HIMMMMMMMMMM

XD

thanks

[procreational.livejournal.com]

Aw, thank you. 100 words are hard! :| It's easier to write more than it is to be concise. I'm flattered you like this.

[hay-linny.livejournal.com]

no concrit :(

but i do ♥ it

[procreational.livejournal.com]

gjhk thank you! :) ♥

[jaeminnie.livejournal.com]

I really like how despite the supposed maturity he's gained a bit of, he's still childish in his indecisiveness. Nice juxtaposition of the statement vs. question forms of "I could want you," too.

I never have concrit for you, bb.

[procreational.livejournal.com]

:D :D Your comments make me feel like I thought of it! Aka intelligent! ilu girl thanks for reading~