Brothers for life; (Response to drabble challenge 5: fight)

[oldwillow-brook.livejournal.com]

Title: Brothers for life
Author: oldwillow_brook
Word Count:200, I found time to change it. Sorry again.
Concrit: Yes, please.
Pairing: You could say none, or OT5
Rating: PG
Summary: Of brothers, and wet towels.
Author Notes: Enjoy!

A wet towel on the floor. Aching arms, a resisting back begs Junsu to leave it. He acquiesces. His body lies on the soft bed and is asleep in seconds. A shout of anger and stumbling pairs of feet has Junsu awake. Jaejoong shouts words of disapproval, words of disappointment. Junsu shouts back, tossing the covers off of his warm body, unable to hold back the days of frustration, months of deprived sleep from his words Changmin near tears, Yoochun unable to understand. Yunho in between his brothers. Shouts of hate, shouts of betrayal erupt. Until the inevitable happens. A hand flies, a face is bruised. Junsu holds his cheek as Jaejoong holds his fist, Yunho ducking just in time. Storms, oceans, rivers of tears and apologies are shared between the five. Days, months of frustration over what could not be changed exploding between themselves and everyone around them. Jaejoong races to hug the sobbing Junsu, Yoochun, and Changmin hurrying to help. Yunho takes the now two sobbing men into the previously occupied bed. Arms hold the five together, apologies held in between. Sweet kisses and warm arms wrap the five together, the seemingly useless fighting only bringing them closer.

Comments

[Mod]

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

This is not technically a drabble, or an accepted division, as stated in the rules.

Also, I've created your author tag now, so as in the rules, please tag with the challenge and your tag for future responses. Thanks.

Re: [Mod]

[oldwillow-brook.livejournal.com]

I'm sorry for any inconvenience. I thought it was okay to make it more then 100 words but maybe I read wrong...

Should I have contacted you in the first place? I'm sorry for this...AHHH, I FEEL SO BAD!! But thank you for making my author tag.

Re: [Mod]

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

100, 150 or 200 words. i.e. a drabble, a drabble and a half or a double drabble. Hope that clarifies things for you.

Re: [Mod]

[oldwillow-brook.livejournal.com]

Alright, I'll fix this. Thankyou.

Re: [Mod]

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[yummy-dreams.livejournal.com]

Don't normally read too many drabbles (or double drabbles or whatever this is called) but even though the characters fight here, somehow it was satisfying (if that is the right word) to read. Perhaps it is because the fighting brings them closer rather than drags them apart - something that many people would wish for in these current times.