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kayjayloves Word Count: 274
Pairing: Jaesu
Concrit: yes'm
Rating: PG
Summary: hey, you and i are going to have a big love affair and it won’t work but somewhere in the middle my god, we tried
Notes: for
itsplashes. ♥ i feel like i haven't written in so long.fear doesn’t taste bitter. it’s numbing salve; the laughing gas in the dentist’s office getting a little out of hand. it makes you take on the blood-rush, fallen heights; you look out the window of the skyscraper when he walks up to you and you wonder how the pavement tastes.
junsu doesn’t say anything more than a “hello.”
(this is half the conversation:
him telling you
when we get caught--
and you saying. –i will live tonight.)
you fight with him in the last car of the bullet train. fastest train in the world, you’ve been told, the words translated into korean after your japanese went sketchy. he spits out eager-angry fake words and you reply with enough bravado to keep your secrets safe. “jaejoong,” he’s saying.
everything after your name goes crashing down.
so you don’t tell him anything sweet or anything too promising but sometimes the two of you sing in the shower and that’s more than enough. it’s the one time the notes don’t become a battle of skills and a pinprick of discomfort when junsu sounds so goddamn beautiful and you’re hitting the high note a little too flat. and, oh, this is where the melody starts.
(--caught on blond skylights.
yoochun: --hey, that sounds like poetry.)
fame runs hot-red and a little bloody. it takes casualties on the spot and rips out hearts and sometimes eats them whole. there’s a whispered spotlight and you turn around and you spit out.
eat your heart out.
it ends on the skyscraper and the bullet train and the recording studio and the stage.
it starts here:
(--one beautiful try.)
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Date: 2009-03-13 02:31 am (UTC)Can't even quote my favorite parts. ajksjdksjdks I love the other halves of the conversation in parentheses the most. Maybe. But then I love the rest, too.
Incoherent comment is incoherent.
Thanks so much for writing this. <3
Also, opening paragraph is killer.
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Date: 2009-03-15 03:10 pm (UTC)you're welcome belle bb! thank you for the lovely comment ♥
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Date: 2009-03-15 03:10 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-03-13 02:45 am (UTC)i saw hey, you and i are going to have a big love affair and it won’t work but somewhere in the middle my god, we tried this on an icon and i so wanted someone to write it so thank youuu.
brb, reading
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Date: 2009-03-13 02:47 am (UTC)(this is half the conversation:
him telling you
when we get caught--
and you saying. –i will live tonight.)
oh gosh oh gosh oh gosh, you know all the things i love in a fic ;_; the whole living and getting caught i love this omfg i really love this just aldjfh ♥
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Date: 2009-03-15 03:11 pm (UTC)you know all the things i love in a fic ;_; the whole living and getting caught
i'm a mind reader, yo ;D
♥ for the comment!
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Date: 2009-03-13 03:18 am (UTC)you don't even have to write anything for me,
i'll pretend this one is for me.
rofl, dying.
this is so gorgeous, i don't know where to begin.
seriously, seriously, i adore the way you write. so much.
your words just flow so well and just-how on earth are you so good at this?
see, i told you how late i would be ksjdksjksd.
/ceases fangirling.
♥ ♥ ♥
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Date: 2009-03-15 03:12 pm (UTC)askl thank you dear ♥
fangirling is all good around here♥ for the comment!
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Date: 2009-03-13 03:23 am (UTC)beautiful, bb! <3
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Date: 2009-03-15 03:13 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2009-03-13 11:52 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-03-15 03:14 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-03-13 09:40 pm (UTC)8Db
God, it feels so deep. Like, there's something I'm missing.
I can feel exactly what they're saying, but everything is a little blurred around the edges.
Ugh. ♥
The way you weave words together is amazing. ;_____;
I love it.
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Date: 2009-03-15 03:15 pm (UTC)=D
I shouldn't be so happy about everything being a little blurred around the edges. xD
Thank you, bb ♥!
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Date: 2009-03-13 10:53 pm (UTC)i wont quote but heres a list, i love the way uve done:
fame
fear
beauty
conversation
oooooo
sankyuu ^^
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Date: 2009-03-15 03:15 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-03-14 06:36 pm (UTC)I DEMAND YOU WRITE MORE JAESU. GOOD GOD. I'm feel both full and empty - how do you write like this? I'm intrigued and I'm amazed.
(--caught on blond skylights.
yoochun: --hey, that sounds like poetry.)
The inclusion of Yoochun was oddly my favourite part - it felt like I was flying for a bit, and then there he was and I'm back on the ground again, waking from a dream. Because your words really do take me somewhere else.
....Again. How do you write like this? :')♥
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Date: 2009-03-15 03:16 pm (UTC)that's actually my favorite line in the whole thing, i don't know how yoochun wormed his way in there but somehow it just, works out. and it's awesome to hear the way you experienced it. xD
thank you, bb! ♥!!
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Date: 2009-03-16 10:12 am (UTC)