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Title: Experiment
Author:
twhitesakura
Word count: 100
Concrit?: Yes, please.
Pairing: Yoomin
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Yoochun and Changmin satisfy their curiosity.
Yoochun’s mouth is generous, wet and warm.
Electricity tingles through Changmin’s limbs like the taste of coffee and cigarettes, seeping into his tongue and skin. It’s dark and humid under the sheets and Changmin squeezes his closed eyes tighter when the two of them break away, needing space and time to catch his breath.
Yoochun clutches Changmin’s arm with a shaking hand.
Changmin opens his eyes in surprise, feels in Yoochun’s careful tremble, a mirrored pleased aftershock.
“Well,” Yoochun says slowly with swollen lips and curiously touches Changmin’s mouth. “That was good.”
Changmin laughs, catches a fingertip between his teeth.
Author:
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Word count: 100
Concrit?: Yes, please.
Pairing: Yoomin
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Yoochun and Changmin satisfy their curiosity.
Yoochun’s mouth is generous, wet and warm.
Electricity tingles through Changmin’s limbs like the taste of coffee and cigarettes, seeping into his tongue and skin. It’s dark and humid under the sheets and Changmin squeezes his closed eyes tighter when the two of them break away, needing space and time to catch his breath.
Yoochun clutches Changmin’s arm with a shaking hand.
Changmin opens his eyes in surprise, feels in Yoochun’s careful tremble, a mirrored pleased aftershock.
“Well,” Yoochun says slowly with swollen lips and curiously touches Changmin’s mouth. “That was good.”
Changmin laughs, catches a fingertip between his teeth.
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Date: 2009-06-11 09:53 pm (UTC)^^
thanks
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Date: 2009-06-13 11:50 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2009-06-11 11:37 pm (UTC)it made me smile, I love the yoomin
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Date: 2009-06-13 11:52 pm (UTC)Thanks!
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Date: 2009-06-13 11:53 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-06-12 04:22 am (UTC)&hearts!! Yoomin :3333
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Date: 2009-06-12 11:43 pm (UTC)It looks as it curiosity doesn't kill the cat after all. :D
Ah, YooMin -- it really does the mind good. :')) Even more than the YooMin, though, I love the way this concept brings about so many images, both simple and complex. Your writing definitely brought that out. And -- darnit. I really need to read more YooMin to satisfy this craving. >.<
Thanks for sharing this lovely piece with us. ♥
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Date: 2009-06-13 11:56 pm (UTC)Thank you for your feedback! ♥ I'm happy that you found the imagery so interesting.