who am i to judge you (drabble challenge 78: purgatory)

[samikitty.livejournal.com]

Title: who am i to judge you
Author: samikitty
People: Jaejoong, Junsu, Changmin (implied JaeSu, MinJae)
Word count: 200
Concrit? sure!
Summary: it's like a three car pile up, but in the space that happens between life and the afterlife, jaejoong and junsu remember different reasons for why they are what they have become, and changmin... is collateral damage.



“Were you human once, little Junsu?”

Junsu fluffed his wings before turning to glare at the demon who’d settled beside him.

“It’s none of your business, Jaejoong…-sshi,” he replied curtly.

“I was human. Fell in love with a boy… No need to wait for judgment, I was just shuttled straight to Hell when I died.”

“Loving someone doesn’t get you sent to Hell.” Junsu pointed at the new arrival that he’d been assigned to evaluate. “He was in love with a boy too.”

Jaejoong flexed his leathery wings, casting a shadow over the human soul below.

“And yet here I am.”

For the first time since Jaejoong had arrived, Junsu looked alarmed.

“No, no. He wasn’t a bad person, he just made some bad decisions. After purification, he comes with me!”

Jaejoong leaned over and kissed Junsu’s cheek.

“Nothing cleanses the soul like hellfire.”

And he leapt down into the grey on grey space below.

“Changmin-ah.”

Changmin’s eyes lit up when he saw Jaejoong and he threw his arms around the demon.

“You shouldn’t have followed me,” Jaejoong whispered against his neck.

“You shouldn’t have followed him,” Changmin replied in kind.

From above, feathers started to fall as Junsu remembered.

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sorry! so rushed... T__T

Comments

[chloe1910.livejournal.com]

a very interesting concept....so Min was in love with Jae while Jae in love with Su and Min...but I guess he loved Su more cause he choose to follow Junsu...

Ah, so Junsu gonna be a fallen angel too after all his memories comes back....

[samikitty.livejournal.com]

kekeke~~ the back story in my head was... well, it's not totally clear even to me, haha, but the basics were: 1) jaejoong was in love with junsu, 2) changmin was in love with jaejoong, 3) junsu died in an accident, 4) jaejoong tried to move on with changmin, but ended up killing himself (which is how he ended up going straight to hell), 5) changmin killed himself to follow jaejoong (but maybe not intentional suicide... maybe suicide by neglience which is why he's in purgatory first)... and then... 6) maybe junsu's death wasn't an accident, which is why he might fall...

kekeke... too convoluted, ne? ^O^;;;;;

thanks for reading~~~ *hugs*

[kurogoma.livejournal.com]

my take is that they were a threesome in life, and will probably be a threesome after death when junsu remembers.

[samikitty.livejournal.com]

keke~~ that's as good an interpretation as any! thanks for reading~~ *hugs*

[twhitesakura.livejournal.com]

I love that last twist with Junsu! Very original.

[samikitty.livejournal.com]

thank you for saying so!! ^^;;;; i'm sorry that it was kind of vague because i had this convoluted backstory in my head but i was trying to force it into this tiny space. keke.

*hugs* thank you for reading~~~

[keiko-kirin.livejournal.com]

Very interesting and clever! I like this. :)

[samikitty.livejournal.com]

aww~~ not clever at all! thank you for reading and saying that you like it. ^^;;;;

[misstellittome.livejournal.com]

whoa...trippy. i really liked it. don't read too much of jaesumin but this was pretty awesome ;D

[samikitty.livejournal.com]

awww~~ thank you for giving it a chance! ^^;;; i don't usually write jaesumin either... well, frankly, i don't think i've ever really written a love triangle before. haha. it's not at all awesome but i'm very happy that you commented so~~~ ^^;;;; *hugs*