Need, Unrequited (Drabble Challenge 142: Insatiable)

[dentedsky.livejournal.com]

Title: Need, Unrequited
Author: dentedsky
Word count: 200
Concrit?: Yes
Pairing: Yunho/Changmin
Author's Notes: Can be read on its own or considered a distant prequel to my other flashfics.


The night before Changmin’s wedding it’s Yunho who’s fretting, checking and rechecking everything is in order before Changmin’s big day. Changmin’s exhaustion catches up with him; when Kyuhyun gets up for another beer Changmin slips side-ways on the couch and falls asleep then and there, eyelashes sweeping against his cheeks as he blinks them closed. Kyuhyun leaves with a murmured comment regarding Changmin’s lack of excitement and Yunho agrees, he’s noticed that too. After he’s gone Yunho stands in the lounge room doorway, hands loose by his sides as he stares at Changmin curled on the couch. He dims the lights and goes to him with the intention of helping him undress but pauses with his fingers curled under the hem of his jumper.

He feels the insidious guilt creep upon him.

There was a point where they were going to have a joint wedding but their fiancés had been against it, and there’s a relief in Yunho’s heart but there’s also an insatiable craving for this man’s reciprocated love, to bask in their shared happiness. Tonight Yunho takes Changmin’s hand and holds on, wonders if he will die from this overwhelming need. Then Yunho burries it, and lives on.

Comments

[dentedsky.livejournal.com]

Thank you bb =D

[cactuzoz.livejournal.com]

I can feel the pain and longing.
Short but impressive~ Loved this!

[dentedsky.livejournal.com]

Thank you! ^^

[t-hikari.livejournal.com]

Oh Rae, you just killed me, I can't.
Please write MOARR >0

[dentedsky.livejournal.com]

Nuuuuuuuuuu don't die! =0
I dunno I want to write more for this 'verse... I guess I will write more when I get struck with inspiration. Don't worry they have a happy ending I promise!

[sexphysics.livejournal.com]

Sobbing at the beauty of your writing.

I've read your other flashfic before, the one titled "Love, Halfway There", and it was so beautiful I remember I recced it somewhere.

Why don't you write more Homin? T_T

[dentedsky.livejournal.com]

I'm so happy =') I'm glad you like my fics ^^

I'm trying~ lol. Actually yesterday I submitted my homin big bang fic... but it hasn't been posted yet.

[buzbean.livejournal.com]

Ouch! poor yunnie bear, again
but touching, please write more
Love your fics

[dentedsky.livejournal.com]

I know~ do I enjoy toturing him I wonder?
Thank you honey, that means a lot from you ^^

[isimplicityy.livejournal.com]

This is so like Yunho to hide what he's feeling♥
Although this was short, it has a lot of meaning behind it.
I love it^^
Thank you for this♥

[dentedsky.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it. =D

[acornmama.livejournal.com]

My first reaction was to gasp. That can't be the end of it. No way. Luckily there is more. Interesting Kyuhyun shows up, I enjoy their friendship.