[identity profile] ianinna.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] dbsk_flashfic
title: to ask if i could stay
author: ianinna
word count: 200
concrit: yes, please.
characters: siwon/changmin
summary:
Come a little closer, flicker in flight / We'll have about an inch's space and I'm here / I can breathe in what you breathe out. - 'gemini', by spongecola
author's notes: because shay has complete control over my muses, and she wanted siwon/changmin, who are beautiful.  also for [profile] aoireeza, because sometimes i have no words for my love.


Changmin knew he’d find him up here, sitting in the silence smeared against the sky.

“One hour, hyung.”

Siwon looked up. Changmin draped himself over whatever space was left on the roof bench.

“Yeah,” Siwon leaned back, staring blankly at the skyline.

Changmin watched as Siwon’s face transformed — gone was the focused, brilliant light that was often in his eyes (Choi Siwon, darling of the press, of the fans), replaced by a quiet sort of luminance that Changmin never really got to see much on anyone anymore, not even on himself.

Siwon shifted slightly, an invitation, and Changmin leaned into the almost-embrace.

There were a million things running through Changmin’s head — questions, dance steps, song lyrics, confessions. He decided to shut those out for a while, one hour, closed his eyes and breathed in deeply.

They had been practicing for weeks for this showcase, SM Town full-blast, everyone offering their best, their all.

Changmin and Siwon lived for performing, for this life in the sea of audiences and lights (and love), but as Siwon’s fingers slipped into the spaces between Changmin’s, they remembered that sometimes, all they needed to be truly happy is one hour of standstill and each other.

Date: 2008-04-25 12:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ttaejoong-hyuk.livejournal.com
awwww!!!! this was sooooo sweet!!!!! i actually like this couple a lot!!!! it's just too bad it's not a common crossover pairing....but thank you for writing this!!! XDDD

Date: 2008-04-25 01:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaemint.livejournal.com
omfg. you just gave me shimin sdjl;ae;iuepewmtkrlo

i've been waiting so long for someone to write shimin for me but but but no one did and i'm getting desperate until i've decided to write it myself but but but- *incoherent*

can i can i can i love you forever for this? ♥

I LOVE YOU RIX.

Date: 2008-04-25 01:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaemint.livejournal.com
it's in mah head. 8D

Date: 2008-04-25 01:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaemint.livejournal.com
hm, idk. i'm addicted to yours and mine won't come out anymore. :D

Date: 2008-04-25 01:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wmelon-kaiye.livejournal.com
O_O
SIMIN?
Uh choiMin? XD
MinWon? *headdesk*
That was lovely. :3

Date: 2008-04-25 01:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaemint.livejournal.com
ohhhh, i like minwon. that'll mean changmin tops. 8D

Date: 2008-04-25 01:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaemint.livejournal.com
well, i guess i can agree to that. only for this one time cause it's siwon. :P

Date: 2008-04-25 02:26 am (UTC)
ext_32036: (jaemin: so who's the victor now)
From: [identity profile] onew.livejournal.com

thank you so much for this, honey. this is lovely. love you muich.♥

Date: 2008-04-25 07:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kallistei.livejournal.com
♥ I love this ask for fic; get it thing. :D

And this too. I think the quiet suits it, suits them, perfectly.

Date: 2008-04-25 03:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kallistei.livejournal.com
:D Maybe my next Changmin icon will double as a vile dictator one.

I am so proud! *pats head*

Date: 2008-04-27 08:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] halfkissed.livejournal.com
i feel weird. i'm not used to reading you like this. xD

but but! it was still very very well written and sweet. i didn't think i'd get to read shimin anytime soon... but i did <3333 you made me, again, without even knowing it. lol

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