within a dream (response to drabble challenge 11: deadlines)

[kandadze.livejournal.com]

Title: within a dream
Author: kandadze
Word count: 150
Concrit?: sure
Pairing: Yoochun/Junsu
Rating: G


Yoochun doesn’t have plans for the future. He feels time brush at his fingers, kissing him on the cheek and then running away, and sometimes he smiles, waving- sometimes he turns away from the traces of footsteps, tears a merciful veil covering his eyes.

Yoochun believes in moments, those small eternities in-between heartbeats, he believes in Junsu’s gasps and laughter, in the way sun reflects in Junsu’s eyes when they call him, challenge him, move him.

Yoochun doesn’t waste time on making plans. He feels his now press against him, catching his breath in a kiss and then running away, and he laughs, stretching. Junsu smiles, asking him to wake up, get up, do his best, give his all-

He does. He brushes at Junsu’s fingers, following-
He knows, one day he’ll fall asleep forever. One day, his time will end.

He wants to be able to smile then.

Comments

[andersenmom.livejournal.com]

Ooh, very nice. I like it.

It's very... etherial (I think that's the right word). I love how you've written it.

[wmelon-kaiye.livejournal.com]

O_O
That made me shiver a little. Hauntingly beautiful? Is that what you would call this piece? <3

[baeby-bloo-skys.livejournal.com]

this feels very dreamy, but it has an anchor in reality

[yume-no-ato.livejournal.com]

This has the feel of rolling around in bed on a Sunday morning to me. It's a good feeling.

Simple and sweet Yoosu is the best. :)

[sweet-byk.livejournal.com]

so sweet n somehow touchy to me ^^

[chloe1910.livejournal.com]

so beautiful.....

[shinchul303.livejournal.com]

Fleetingly light. SERIOUSLY heavy.

(available soon at a store nearby--look for the product in the soft yellow *SLAP!!*)

[ara-niey.livejournal.com]

♥

[usagi-bara.livejournal.com]

So beautiful!

<3!

Hugs!

[why-sabz.livejournal.com]

it sounds like a very fragile relationship....
don't know ho wto explain the yoosu love
very beautiful indeed

[haru-e.livejournal.com]

very sweet ♥
gives me a dreamy feeling xD

[kratynoi.livejournal.com]

Lovely~
Although the last few lines made me kind of sad. But it was still very lovely. ^^ ♥

[indifferance.livejournal.com]

Aw that was very well written and sweet.

Love it.

[crazyoverbishie.livejournal.com]

LOVE IT....just like everyone said...

pls do write more... ^^

[swoon21.livejournal.com]

Thank you, dear. It's lovely~

[faricsyung.livejournal.com]

I somehow missed this? o.0

This was pretty. I've repeated so many times to the point that I think I've become a broken player, I like the strong hints of reality in your fics - the bitter-sweet side of life.

Lovely. Thanks. <3