Starting something new. (drabble challenge 1: beginnings)

[foolishlovexo.livejournal.com]

Title: Starting something new.
Author: Rie foolishlovexo
Word count: 100
Concrit?: Sure…
Pairing: YunChun
A/N: I hope this is good! *hides*

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Yunho presses soft kisses, while tracing the outline of Yoochun’s jaw (What‘re you doing?). He doesn’t receive answers, just a mouth full of teeth and tongue, aggressive and powerful. When Yunho stops, looking him in the eye, smiling (Starting something new), playing with the hem of Yoochun’s shirt. He doesn’t say anything just lets new feeling’s take over, like a massive storm; he’s not sure he wants to end, which scares him. Yoochun’s always been scared of new beginnings; changes.  

 

 

But, later Yoochun watches Yunho, closely, and thinks that this is the beginning of something he’s not so scared of.

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Comments are loved ♥

Comments

[onew.livejournal.com]

nice. :D be careful with your use of commas and semi-colons, though. too many semi-colons in a sentence would make the sentence a run-on. but all in all, this is good. :D

[foolishlovexo.livejournal.com]

Thanks ♥
& Thanks for the advise!

(I was actually about to edit that(but forgot) XD Thanks for reminding me ^^)

♥♥♥

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

I haven't got time to comment on the fic right now, but I will be back! What would you like your author tag to be, though? rie or foolishlovexo?

[foolishlovexo.livejournal.com]

Okay ♥

foolishlovexo.

[wmelon-kaiye.livejournal.com]

YUNCHUN <3

Anng. &hearts

[foolishlovexo.livejournal.com]

♥♥♥

Thanks!

[ara-niey.livejournal.com]

beautiful~♥