Enough (for drabble challenge 12: intersections)

[cynsinnn.livejournal.com]

Title: Enough
Author: Cynsinnn
Word count: 150
Concrit?: Yup
Pairing: Jaeminsu
Author's Notes: First try over here, comments are <3ed!

Changmin walks.

His footing is unsure and unsteady, side-stepping to the left, then to the right. “How many more steps to go? I can’t… this is…” Junsu turns back, and his eyes are smiling, catching the light of the sun’s rays. “Come on, Minnie. It’s only so much more to go.” He captures Changmin’s wrist, holds it tight around his fingers, and Junsu can feel the sticky-salty touch of sweat against his skin. Down the straight path they go, until a blurry figure comes into vision, and their quick steps slow down to a halt.

Jaejoong.

And Changmin runs, runs across the road, while Junsu watches, his eyes still smiling. And Junsu takes his own hands and feels the traces of Min that have been left on him, the familiar scent still lingering on his shoulder. He is happy, or so he thinks, because maybe this was enough for now.

Comments

[indifferance.livejournal.com]

Very interesting. Makes me want more. :)

[cynsinnn.livejournal.com]

Thank you xD This is as far as I can manage. Haha.

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

Ah, interesting. I'm curious about the little hints you dropped about what's going on with Changmin here.

Also, I've created your author tag for future responses.

[cynsinnn.livejournal.com]

xD thankyou! i've never attempted this threesome before so i hope its okay :D

[wmelon-kaiye.livejournal.com]

I do like how subtle the fic is :)
Nothing is really given for granted and it makes me want to cuddle Su. ;__;

[cynsinnn.livejournal.com]

Thankyou :D
Yes, Su suffers -huggles-

[jaemint.livejournal.com]

this is really sweet. but i feel kind of bitter for su. ♥

[cynsinnn.livejournal.com]

thankyou :D the icon matches the pairing xD
su's the focus here, that poor boy :X

[angelicbuttons.livejournal.com]

Oh Su. &hearts

Oh wait, it should "Oh Min" but heh, Su's being left aside!

[cynsinnn.livejournal.com]

Yes -pats the Junsu- It's my fault ):
Thanks for commenting ♥

[quiet-heartache.livejournal.com]

aww all these comments feel bad for Su and i admit, im sympatethic toooo.
but minnie's tentative steps and fragile-ness makes me wanna know more about him aswell so nya!
thankee for the fic *wants more....* *hopeful* O:)

[cynsinnn.livejournal.com]

thankyou ♥
I don't know how much more I can manage to write. haha. But maybe I will think about this plot point more.

[quiet-heartache.livejournal.com]

okies! dont strain urself tho, tis a writers perogative to post or not to post. it just so happens that when they do, it makes the rest of the world happier XD

[ianinna.livejournal.com]

it breaks my heart, but it's still beautiful. D: ♥

[cynsinnn.livejournal.com]

thankyou <3
Junsu suffers :X