Recess (response to drabble challenge 12: intersections)

[onew.livejournal.com]

Title: Recess
Author: Reeza (aoireeza)
Word count: 100 words
Concrit?: sure. :D
Pairing: YunChun
Rating: PG
Summary: Mr. Park prefers long lectures. Mr. Jung prefers none. (for dbsk_flashfic @ drabble challenge 12: intersections; also for dbdbyeah/pach_unni)


Yunho fits in his life/ like a piece of puzzle/ that has long been lost and finally found. Yunho isn’t exactly/ the kind of guy he’d fall for (anytime)/ but he could use (something new new) a new perspective/ and sunshine (daisies).

(He is a college professor/ and so is Yunho. He learns (Yunho’s) history/ when he walks in/ on Yunho reading (a book, naturally). Yunho tells him about life.)

So when Yunho calls him (by name)/ he turns around sharply/ tumbles/ falls so slowly/ and stands just as slow. Hello, Mr. Park. The lecture begins. And hello, Mr. Jung.

Comments

[halfkissed.livejournal.com]

can i call you the jig to my saw?

or the jiggle to my bilbil? lmbo

ILU. ♥

[jaemint.livejournal.com]

Wow. What is this? I have nothing to say actually.

But I can feel something amazing. o___O

IT'S LIKE MAGMA.

[xiao_tian_jelly.livejournal.com]

this sounds kinky without even trying. yataaaa!

<3

[quiet-heartache.livejournal.com]

oooo....i likey!
YunChun is an interesting pairing, and i like that its kinda song like with brackets and forward slashes and such
thankeee

[afruz.livejournal.com]

this was interesting.. *curious*
Can you help me to understand the usage of backslash and brackets that excessive?
I am assuming that a backslash stands before cliché terms/phrases, right?
Thank you!

[tyreling.livejournal.com]

... very interesting drabble. Pieces of a puzzle, kind of, but I do admit the slashes and brackets confused me somehow. ^^ though, it's still nice to see a different writing style here.

[kratynoi.livejournal.com]

Ooo~
I really liked this new...form(?) of writing. It was very interesting to read. A little odd and disjointed, but I think it added to the effect.

[wmelon-kaiye.livejournal.com]

dies
Mr Park~ XDDDD