oxygen :: response to drabble challenge 14: necessity

[halfkissed.livejournal.com]

Title: oxygen
Author: dbdbyeah
Word Count: 100
Concrit?: yes, please.
Pairing: jaejoong / yoochun

A/N: omgah i've missed writing for my jaechun. and happy fluffy jaechun at that! *pokes ianinna and angelacaduca* no "shit unni, it's friday!" this week. *does super-dorky-ninja!victory pose*

also, for sisowath. BECAUSE. ♥




Skyscrapers and rainbow colors fascinate Jaejoong. His eyes reflect bright lights that stay on until the wee hours of the night. His feet shuffle to the melody of traffic jams and crowded streets, heart beating in sync with the early morning rush.

Sometimes, Jaejoong forgets to breathe.

He can only slow down with the soft touch of a hand. A gentle pull making him stop, look around and realize there’s no need for speed. Yoochun tells him, the world’s not going anywhere without you.


So Jaejoong breathes Yoochun in (deep) — breathes out, then sings.

(The world stops spinning to listen.)

Comments

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

Hahaha, it's a miracle! ;)

And this was lovely. Ah, Jaechun. Just a typo in the third sentence - should be 'His feet shuffle.

[halfkissed.livejournal.com]

at least you know now that i won't be bugging you on friday. lmbo! xDDD

and thank you! and and... i shall edit right nao. *runs* ♥

[onew.livejournal.com]

you already know what i think about this. my heart's still going dokidoki, really. ♥

[halfkissed.livejournal.com]

*dances to the beat of your heart* ♥

[wmelon-kaiye.livejournal.com]

&hearts

[halfkissed.livejournal.com]

♥_____♥

[quiet-heartache.livejournal.com]

aww chunnie will help him through it, yay for jaechun!
'He can only slow down with the soft touch of a hand.' <3
thankee

[halfkissed.livejournal.com]

YAY INDEED! ♥

thanks for reading. ^^,

[ianinna.livejournal.com]

Oh. OH. So much pretty! ♥

[halfkissed.livejournal.com]

because it is jaechunnnnnn ♥

[jen-is-random.livejournal.com]

*smile*
That's all I can do.
Just... *smile*

[halfkissed.livejournal.com]

i'm glad it made you smile. ^^, thanks for reading. ♥

[crimeis.livejournal.com]

give you a big smooch on the cheeks. BECAUSE ♥ :) i love this. squishes you soulmate-ah, you're so nice to me, ily baby.

[halfkissed.livejournal.com]

that is because i miss you, and i owe you a HUGE addiction update. huuuuu *clings*

[essyllus.livejournal.com]

♥♥♥ I really like the pacing. :)

[halfkissed.livejournal.com]

heeee thank you. ♥

[vicvickyrox.livejournal.com]

omg *clutches heart* the words...
<3!

[halfkissed.livejournal.com]

*clutches you* i miss the regular hyperness that is you and your sister. waaaaaa

[chloe1910.livejournal.com]

Gasp...My heart stopped for 8 seconds to listen to them too.<33333

[halfkissed.livejournal.com]

is it beating again now? wouldn't want my wifey to die on me. *squishes*

[chloe1910.livejournal.com]

I won't die on you, hubby!!

[jaely.livejournal.com]

^3^....so beautiful..thank you for writing this one...it makes me feel so warm and bubbly......I love JaeChun .....*floats in Jaechun dream land*

[halfkissed.livejournal.com]

*FLOATS WITCHU* ♥