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Title: dance inside
Author: [livejournal.com profile] junyoo
Word count: 485 words
Concrit?: sure thing!
Pairing: Yunho/Yoochun
Rating: PG
Summary: Yoochun's having trouble with dancing.
Author's Notes: for [livejournal.com profile] angelacaduca, yunho to my yoochun forever and always ♥


Step, step, turn, another mess-up. Yoochun sighs, kicks at the air. The salty ocean breeze rushes in through the open windows, making the transparent curtains hanging over them dance. Dancing: what Yoochun's trying to do and failing. Frustration has him leaning against the wall with his head hung and sweat dripping off the tip of his nose when Yunho walks in.

"Yoochun."

Yoochun doesn't look up, already knows what he'll see: Yunho, disapproving frown on his face and worry in his eyes. "Just trying to get the dance down, Yunho," he says, tilting his head back with eyes closed, playing half a beat on the wall. "We have to perform it in less than two weeks and I'm only half-way into getting it memorized."

The sound of Yunho crossing the room is loud, careful steps and graceful elegance. Yoochun's always been jealous of Yunho for that, the way he can move so effortlessly when he's not even trying. Yoochun feels Yunho's breath across his face when the steps stop, and opens his eyes. Worry. "C'mon," Yunho says simply, lacing fingers in Yoochun's and tugging. Yoochun frowns confusedly but Yunho doesn't elaborate with anything other than a smile. Yoochun sighs again, resigned, and follows Yunho out of the room.

Yunho takes him to the beach. The water crawls up the sand, latching onto the loose white pants Yoochun's wearing and soaking them down. Yunho stops and turns suddenly, taking both of Yoochun's hands in his own. "Like this," he says, and begins moving.

There's a party down the beach, summery music floating down to their ears. Yunho moves with it easily, hips like water, and Yoochun watches for a few moments. Yunho doesn't let him watch for long, though, moves forward and aligns their hips perfectly. Yunho smiles, carefree like he hasn't in a long time, and rests his hands on Yoochun's hips, guiding him. Yoochun can't help but grin back, feeling a little more relaxed, himself. The breeze ruffles Yunho's hair against Yoochun's face as he leans in, lips skimming Yunho's jaw lightly. "You make it look so easy," he murmurs.

Yunho's chuckle seems to slide down Yoochun's spine like warm syrup. "It is, Chunnie," he replies, lips brushing the outer shell of Yoochun's ear, "Don't think, feel."

And feel Yoochun does, with Yunho's hips and hands there to help him. Here, they're synced-- thoughts, feelings, dancing. The water laps insistently at their feet and ankles, but there's nothing other than the beat and the sound of Yunho's breathing in his ear, nothing but the feeling of Yunho's body effortless like it always is, feeding into Yoochun and letting him wash away. "That's it," Yunho breathes, sliding his arms completely around Yoochun's waist, pulling him closer still. Yoochun buries his fingers in Yunho's hair and does some pulling-in of his own, a sweet kiss that leaves him feeling long after it ends.

Date: 2008-06-16 01:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] applesu.livejournal.com
not for me, but i comment anyways ♥

gorgeous *___* light and free - danceyfeet!yunho :DDD they are so sweet, waiii. so much love ;;

you are too good, bb.

Date: 2008-06-16 02:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pureuda.livejournal.com
so lovely! C: ♥

Date: 2008-06-16 03:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kiibou.livejournal.com
omg. i have no words to describe how amazingly brilliant this is.

love it; ♥

Date: 2008-06-16 03:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] halfkissed.livejournal.com
it's been a LONG time since i last read happy, fluffy, simple yunchun. even i write them angst. aaaa *bricksself*

this was wonderful, dear. ♥

Date: 2008-06-16 07:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kallistei.livejournal.com
♥ Yunho and I thank you very much. ;) So pretty, Jamiepuff.

Date: 2008-06-16 10:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quiet-heartache.livejournal.com
'The water laps insistently at their feet and ankles, but there's nothing other than the beat and the sound of Yunho's breathing in his ear, nothing but the feeling of Yunho's body effortless like it always is, feeding into Yoochun and letting him wash away' - *dies* too. beautiful. O_O

yay for the luffly fluff ^^

thanks

Date: 2008-06-16 02:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ara-niey.livejournal.com
awwww~such a great teacher yun is..keke~

Date: 2008-06-16 03:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hay-linny.livejournal.com
oh yunchun! *____* so pretty ♥

Date: 2008-06-17 07:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] junsu-hyung.livejournal.com
I agree with my Chunnie(chunxo, and I am her Yunnie ^^)! This is amazing! I love how you describe the littlest details of what is going on! ^^ This YunChun was gorgeous! ♥

Date: 2008-06-27 03:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ibaranonamida.livejournal.com
This is not only well-written and happy but totally sexy too.

Wow.

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