Tequila Sunrise (drabble response 19: sunrise)

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Title: Tequila Sunrise
Author: pinkfluffies
Word count: 150
Concrit?: Yes please!
Pairing: HoMin
Rating: R (language & alcohol)

The burn is blunt going down his throat, raw taste that makes the world spin when he moves too fast. One more, just one more.

The liquid is so fucking colorful it hurts his eyes. The red, the yellow, the crash in the middle that screams love and happiness – just things he doesn’t have and he begins to think he never will. Last one… last one.

The gradient of hues reminds him of distant memories that make his stomach feel funny. Or maybe it’s just the tequila.

He shrugs, downing one more. One fucking more and that is it. He laughs and it sounds foreign to his ears. His promises never did mean much, did they?

Changmin had always reminded him of dawn, too bright and too fucking beautiful for his own good.  Thoughts on irony are chased away by an all too familiar bitter blazing down a tender esophagus.

 

Comments

[morninglory17.livejournal.com]

>.<
OHNOz!

[pinkfluffies.livejournal.com]

??? Good or bad lol xDD

[morninglory17.livejournal.com]

Haha, the drabble is good!! I was just sad for Yunho.
:)

[pinkfluffies.livejournal.com]

^_______^ I'm gld you liked it~

[cynsinnn.livejournal.com]

I like the intensity of it, especially this line Changmin had always reminded him of dawn, too bright and too fucking beautiful for his own good. ♥ its a good piece !

[pinkfluffies.livejournal.com]

^______^ Thank you so much!!!

[ara-niey.livejournal.com]

*sigh*

[pinkfluffies.livejournal.com]

^_____^

[quiet-heartache.livejournal.com]

ooooooooo...powerful, bitter, melikes.
especially the end, poor poor homin

thanks

[pinkfluffies.livejournal.com]

:3
Glad you liked it~
Thanks<3