Dead Air :: response to drabble challenge 9: epiphany

[dbdbyeah.livejournal.com]

Title: Dead Air
Author: dbdbyeah
Word Count: 150
Concrit?: yes, please. this wasn't beta'd. :c
Pairing: Yunho / Junsu

A/N: i haven't written anything in a long time. this is dedicated to aoireeza, coz she's my hosu, jaesu, muse and she might not be feeling too good right now. *hugs* written while listening to Sarah Bareilles' GRAVITY.

may or may not come after this and this. but wouldn't it be nicer if it did? lol. *bricked* it should. c:




It was one of those cold nights. Another day of keeping up appearances had passed. Carrying U-know on his shoulders all day weighed heavily on Yunho’s soul (again, as always.)

Hyung, echoed a familiar voice — soft threads of concern weaving their way into Yunho’s heart. The anticipation of the gentle touch that usually followed spread warmth through Yunho’s body.

He was ready to ignore it. Yunho had the act down. He was supposed to say I’m fine, and then turn his back. Junsu was supposed to climb on the bed and nudge him, occasionally placing butterfly kisses on his hair. They were supposed to fight over a massage and the need to talk and the space between them. Yunho was supposed to feign sleep, making Junsu sigh before giving him one last kiss.

Junsu was supposed to be there.

Hyung…

But Yunho wasn’t supposed to mind that he wasn’t, either.

Comments

[onew.livejournal.com]

But Yunho wasn’t suppose to mind that he wasn’t, either.
ouch.
this was lovely, honey.♥ and thanks for writing for me. love you much.

[dbdbyeah.livejournal.com]

i love you too..

i know this is so cliche.. dang. but... i hope you feel better soon. and i'm just here if you need to talk. *hugs*

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

Sigh, Yunho. Sigh! I liked this, and it rang true to a lot of how I see Yunho.

Just a couple of concrit things, though. 'Putting up appearances' is a bit of a mixed metaphor, and I think your last sentence should read, '...Yunho wasn't supposed to mind...'.

[dbdbyeah.livejournal.com]

yunho's just...... *sigh*

thank you for the concrit! i've changed "suppose" already... i don't know what to do with "putting up appearances" tho. > < but i'll change it once i figure it out.

thanks again... <3

[dbdbyeah.livejournal.com]

keeping up apperances, maybe? would it work? *isstumped*

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I was just about to suggest that. :)

[dbdbyeah.livejournal.com]

yay! edited it... thank you. c:

[kallistei.livejournal.com]

You're welcome. :)

[ara-niey.livejournal.com]

aww~poor yunnie..

[dbdbyeah.livejournal.com]

he kinda brought it upon himself.. *sighs* oh wae must i write broken hosu? -_-

[ara-niey.livejournal.com]

ohh~i didn't noticed this is related to last hosu and jaesu..
yunnie deserved it then..*sigh*

[melodeon-effect.livejournal.com]

*sigh* Yunho just stop and go to him! ;_;

this is still me, dbdbyeah.... i promise. lol.

[halfkissed.livejournal.com]

let's push him towards junsu... naooooooo. *cries*

XD I've stalked you enough to know XDDD ...opps LOL

[melodeon-effect.livejournal.com]

YES! *pushes Yunho toward a waiting Su*

[morninglory17.livejournal.com]

Aww, Yunho...not supposed to mind, but he does...
HoSu<3

this is still me, dbdbyeah.... i promise. lol.

[halfkissed.livejournal.com]

i really need to write a happy hosu for a change... raaawr. <3

[darknessgryphon.livejournal.com]

Stupid, obstinate Yunho... He really needs to just go up to Junsu and own up to his own feelings.

(Apparently we have at least two things in common: we both wrote these last challenges while listening to Sarah Bareilles ["Bottle it Up" for me], and we both write broken!HoSu [with a little Jae tossed in])

this is still me, dbdbyeah.... i promise. lol.

[halfkissed.livejournal.com]

i haven't read ittttttttt. (but i will read it after this eheh. i haven't read much this week. -_-) but that is so cool! we both even had sarah bareilles for inspiration too. *twirls around you* <3

now let's go try writing some happy hosu/jae... yeah? lol.

[wmelon-kaiye.livejournal.com]

o__o
Oooh, wow. I like. <3
But whyfore so much angst in this comm??
What ever happened to fluff and dork time?

this is still me, dbdbyeah.... i promise. lol.

[halfkissed.livejournal.com]

i dunnnooooooo. someone give me a happy muse. -_-

and thanks. eheh.

[oldwillow-brook.livejournal.com]

But Yunho wasn’t supposed to mind that he wasn’t, either.

I feel bad for Yunho but you have this sense of understanding for him. Like you don't want any more pressure just a sense of happiness for him.

♥ anyway..:DDDDDDDDD

this is still me, dbdbyeah.... i promise. lol.

[halfkissed.livejournal.com]

yunho just..... needs a break to sort his brain out sometimes. *sighs*


♥

[chloe1910.livejournal.com]

TT__TT...gulp...sad Hosu again...