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dbsk_flashficTitle: That noisy beat
Author: Reeza (![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
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Word count: 150 words
Concrit?: sure. :D
Pairing: HoSu
Rating: PG
Summary: They're dancing without shoes. Lord knows they'll slip and fall. (for![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-community.gif)
dbsk_flashfic @ drabble challenge 20: bare feet; inspired by this)
They’re a bit too enigmatic for each other to save each other’s lives (hearts). Yunho’s smiling that small smile of his – the one that reflects the child in him, not the leader – and breaking Junsu’s heart little by little, one step, one beat, one song at a time. In response, Junsu smiles a little too brightly – it blinds Yunho’s eyes; it can kill. So they dance to smiles set to the tune of a country-style love song, and they can freely dance as they wish – a step here, two counts till they take a step forward, just one more step before their lips touch and they lose all control – finally.
Somewhere along the way, they stumble and fall, and they’re all limbs and hearts over one another. It’s a twisted fate, but it works. They rise, hand-in-hand, dance to a new beat.
It’s about time they get the steps right.
Author: Reeza (
aoireeza)Word count: 150 words
Concrit?: sure. :D
Pairing: HoSu
Rating: PG
Summary: They're dancing without shoes. Lord knows they'll slip and fall. (for
dbsk_flashfic @ drabble challenge 20: bare feet; inspired by this)They’re a bit too enigmatic for each other to save each other’s lives (hearts). Yunho’s smiling that small smile of his – the one that reflects the child in him, not the leader – and breaking Junsu’s heart little by little, one step, one beat, one song at a time. In response, Junsu smiles a little too brightly – it blinds Yunho’s eyes; it can kill. So they dance to smiles set to the tune of a country-style love song, and they can freely dance as they wish – a step here, two counts till they take a step forward, just one more step before their lips touch and they lose all control – finally.
Somewhere along the way, they stumble and fall, and they’re all limbs and hearts over one another. It’s a twisted fate, but it works. They rise, hand-in-hand, dance to a new beat.
It’s about time they get the steps right.
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Date: 2008-06-28 02:57 am (UTC)I loved your inspiration, and I love yours. XDDDD The last line is just wonderful.
You're just WONDERFUL. =] ^3^ ♥
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Date: 2008-06-28 03:41 am (UTC)(i don't know what else to say. stupid brain doesn't want to work.)
lovely as always bb!
i really liked the started lining, grew me into it nicely ^^;
♥thanks!
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Date: 2008-06-28 03:45 am (UTC)man i think i need sleep. ><;;
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Date: 2008-06-28 03:55 am (UTC)This.
For me.
*flails like no tomorrow*
Thank you so much.
My favourite line (it's so difficult to choose) is Somewhere along the way, they stumble and fall, and they’re all limbs and hearts over one another. Gah so beautiful. But really, the entire piece stole my soul.
♥
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Date: 2008-06-28 07:05 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-06-28 08:34 pm (UTC)i dont usually like hosu much, but speaking of smiles, i can feel the link now XDDD
beautiful
thanks
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Date: 2008-07-09 03:06 pm (UTC)